Concrit Post 22

[hmd_me]

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[ascendtoace]

A Facility | a_facility
Jack Noir (Homestuck) | ascendtoace
Vaati (The Legend of Zelda: the Minish Cap) | stealinghats

Full muselist is here, personal HMD here.

[hydok]

hnnnnnnnnnnnnnng jackkkkkkkkkk i love him. i love his awkward RAEG and how he shoas everyone his stabs (and... other parts) and how he beats people with chairs and how he's just like this hissing ball of HAET and FROTHING FLAIL and then STUFF HAPPENS and he's awkward and catnip and crpmakeouts and skeevy at pm and things.

tl;dr:
I really like how well you handle Jack in a situation that is unusual for him (longterm interaction without being able to just kill everyone) and really enjoy stalking him.

[ascendtoace]

hgfhgdhg aaaaaaaaa I'm glad you approve because sometimes I worry I make him too nice/sociable... then again if I tried to play him as even more of an asshole he'd never interact with anyone ever unless it was to try to kill them :|a

So yes THANK YOU and here have an adorable icon just for you :>!

[tinyguillotine]

I don't think he's too nice, I think you've hit that lovely precarious balance between HATE and CUDDLES, though it would be really easy to topple over into too-nice because it's easier to get CR that way, but you've handled him very very well so far!

[ironicpurposes]

hey

HEY

i like your jack 8] AS IF THAT'S A SECRET but i felt like reiterating that he's awesome

keep on being absolutely amazing lavvy <3

[missmaillady]

Hydok pretty much said everything there is to say! I like that Jack is slowly (inevitably) (GLACIALLY) sort of maybe kind of befriending people, but he's definitely still a complete tool. Seriously, your Jack was one of the deciding factors for me joining a_fac and threading with you is a blast.

/TANGLEBUDDIES