Crit Post 23

[hmd_me]

How's My Driving?
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∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism.
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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[autophoenix]

@ damnedclaire bennet ∞ heroes ∞ autophoenix
ruby ∞ supernatural ∞ thatdemonbitch

@ dramadramaduckclaire bennet ∞ heroes ∞ autophoenix

@ paradisaclaire bennet ∞ heroes ∞ autophoenix

@ polychromaticelle bishop ∞ heroes ∞ causeblackouts
damon salvatore ∞ the vampire diaries ∞ miseternity

@ sirenspullelle bishop ∞ heroes ∞ causeblackouts

@ museboxesfaith lehane ∞ btvs/angel ∞ almostnodeck
peter petrelli ∞ heroes ∞ gota2ndchance
lana lang ∞ smallville ∞ liberatae
dean winchester ∞ supernatural ∞ obiwanning

[autophoenix]

This is for Damon Salvatore at Polychro.

I've noticed your use of italics seems... off, if that makes sense? Italics indicate emphasis, and sometimes you put them in places that render the tag oddly off-kilter and jarring to read.

As a suggestion maybe speaking your tags aloud might help, so you can see where the emphasis would naturally fall.

[miseternity]

It makes sense! I'm sorry that it's been seeming that way. I've been trying to say them out loud but I might need to add more notes of pauses and that kind of stuff or think it over a second time before posting to just double-check that the way I'm hearing it makes sense to other people.

So, thanks for the heads up! I like getting to know early on what I'm doing wrong so I can amend it right away. :) So I appreciate this immensely.

[autophoenix]

this is mainly for ddd.

you play claire well and i don't have any sort of concrit for her. however, i have noticed that you tend to tag only certain people in the game. it's not really all that fair for people who do want cr with your character, if that makes sense.

[autophoenix]

In a lot of ways I feel like that's concrit for the game itself because a lot of people don't do a lot of tagging around as far as new people go, but that doesn't mean I'm not taking it seriously as personal concrit.

The problem is that with Claire's canon point, she doesn't really open up to new people or want to put her problems in some other person's life by talking to them and going out of her way to create acquaintance, if that makes sense? It would be OOC for me to tag around to new people with her while she's at Into Asylum. I understand that it's a problem for making new CR, but I'd rather strengthen CR I have and do what would be IC for Claire than force her into tagging things that she wouldn't ICly tag.

However, my posts are always open to the entirety of the community -- she doesn't make posts that are entirely locked to a certain group ever, so you're always more than welcome to tag into those if you feel the need to get CR with her and don't already have it.