Crit Post 24

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[autophoenix]

@damnedclaire bennet ★ heroes ★ autophoenix
ruby ★ supernatural ★ thatdemonbitch

@dramadramaduckclaire bennet ★ heroes ★ autophoenix
faith lehane ★ btvs/ats ★ almostnodeck

@paradisaclaire bennet ★ heroes ★ autophoenix

@polychromaticdamon salvatore ★ vampire diaries ★ miseternity
elle bishop ★ heroes ★ causeblackouts

@museboxes/private/dropped/etcbruce wayne ★ nolan batman ★ ratherdieahero
dean winchester ★ supernatural ★ obiwanning
lana lang ★ smallville ★ liberatae

[feltalone]

I'm sure you knew I was going to say something about Lana, because...I have to. I'm very particular about her, and the first Lana I ever really enjoyed enough to stalk was notyouranswer. Yours is the second. You've got an incredible grip on her for someone so new to the enigma that is Lana Lang. I knew you would, which is why I encouraged you to try her out. You've got some room for improvement, but I'm not going to give any specific pointers. All I'm going to say is keep watching and keep playing, because I know that's all you need to be the best Lana you can be and one day rival me to the point that no one will ever want my Lana ever again. (Okay, so that's a little melodramatic, but you know what I mean.)

[autophoenix]

LMAO I felt it coming. ♥ But, I'm really glad you're enjoying her! You know it means a ton coming from you. As far as assisting your stalking goes, I'm mostly playing her in anotheroceanic until I pick a canon point for her and app her into polychromatic.

I'm up to S7 now and I'm planning on doing a luthored!Lana dear_mun post at some point while I'm in S7 too, so that'll hopefully help me work on wherever you see the room for improvement being needed.

[feltalone]

I've been reading that app and squeeing so much over it, you have no idea.

I'll be on the lookout for that. Maybe I'll throw one of my other Smallville people at her. I'm so out of practice with all of them.

[autophoenix]

SCREAMS WHAT REALLY. ;_; Lmao when I finish it I'm going to make you look over it okay. I know I'm going to initially app her from an early canon point and probably gradually update her to ... idk probably psycho S7 Lana for Poly, but yeah I'msogladyoulikeitomg.

And you should totally do it! Or just ... anyone in general at her, okay, even though I would basically be ... having a constant coronary to play her off of you because you're so good with her sobs.

[feltalone]

Mmm, psycho!Lana. One of my favorite kinds.

Now I want to watch Spell and do an Isobel post hnnnnnnn.

LOL, please don't! No coronaries for you! /coronary nazi

[honorregained]

You asked for crit on Faith buuuut I really like her voice so far, so I have none for you! 8D I think she has a hard dialect and speaking style for someone to get down, but I hear her in her tags, so it's all good to me. As we get farther through canon and there's more of a range of emotion shown, I might have actual substantial crit, but for now it's just - keep on keepin' on? ouo

[autophoenix]

Mmmm I'm glad you like her so far since I ... have massive respect for you in your BTVS/ATS opinions since you and Ca are basically the best around. Lmao I always worry that I'm going too overboard with her weird as shit accent, so it's supa reassuring to hear that it's working.

SPEAKING OF FURTHER IN CANON, I was thinking that maybe around the Gwendolyn Post episode I would have her try and get a worldhop and go attack Spike prior to the ... attacking Angel part and say like she told Gwen about the comm and Gwen was like hey Slayer how about you start slaying or sth since Faith would ... be an obedient little girl with parent issues and it would be a good way to include the timeline disparity and get the comm involved but I don't remember if Ca confirmed or declined, but I do know that I was planning on Faith getting her ass kicked lmao. :O What do you think in terms of ... if this sounds like an awesome plan for Faith's life?

[honorregained]

LOL HOW ARE WE THE BEST AROUDN ;lfdkjghaf you're going to give me an ego Tifa l-lolol. Buut more constructively, I wouldn't worry about making Faith overboard. It's natural when you start out to have a hard time knowing where to balance strong voices like that (I know Willow I had this problem with, too, until very recently), so just follow your instincts and you'll get it down.

I'm pretty much like 90% sure Ca will think this is an awesome thing of awesome. XDD She hasn't been on plurk as much recently, so you should IM her if it seems like she's missed something. I PERSONALLY THINK IT SOUNDS GREAT it would definitely get the comm included in BtVS canon, and would probably make for cool times with Spike's CR, and would make Willow all indignant. Ca and I are always bemoaning that Spike and Willow would be amazing BFFles if they didn't have all that pesky canon in the way, so... sounds good to me! XD

[autophoenix]

Thank you for the advice! I've been trying to just not let myself get all caught up in being paranoid about it and just DOING bc I figured when this rolled around if I was failing I could correct it then and it's helped me get a little more comfy with it so hopefully this method will work.

Excellent! Lmao I will IM her as soon as I dig up her AIM name from the TC list. :3 Yaaaay I'm excited bc it'll be like AWESOME BAND CANDY PLOT, THEN AWESOME SPIKE AND FAITH STUFF.

[honorregained]

Yeah, give yourself some room to figure things out? :> She might be coming on a tiny bit strong, but like I said, new muses always do that so as far as I'm concerned, it's not a cause for worry.

It's n0tjesus, to save you the digging. XD YEAH I NEED TO REWATCH AGAIN BECAUSE I HAVE. NO SHORT TERM MEMORY. BUT I WAS HOPING TO CRACK OUT BAND CANDY IN THE NEXT WEEK OR SO? We'll just attack the comm with Buffy awesome.

[autophoenix]

Duly noted and I'll try and err on the side of lightening it in the next month or so and see how that works.

Next week works for me for Band Candy! And ty for the aim name lmao it saves me so much searching. ;;

[honorregained]

YOU WILL DO WONDERFULLY I'M SURE <33

lmao you're welcome. And I sure feel like I've... talked about Band Candy enough that it's time to get it over with. cart before the horse old timey saying here ouo

[askedtobe]

i saw that you asked for crit on Faith specifically, but since I haven't even threaded with her, nor do I... know anything about her canon, I'D BE LESS THAN USEFUL ON THAT FRONT

[autophoenix]

LMAO understandably. ♥ TY for at least wanting to be able to address it.

AWWWWW ;_____; Oh my goodness, Zo, why are you the nicest person ever. I'm really glad that you like Claire so much and that you think so highly of me ohmygosh. ♥ ♥ LMAO I'M GLAD YOU AREN'T TERRIFIED TO THREAD WITH ME ANYMORE, because I love threading with you always, and I will cherish all the time I do get to play with you regardless of how often or late that happens okay. I love you to death and I'm really happy to have you at DDD, SO BASICALLY NO U ON THE AWESOME FRONT.

[askedtobe]

♥!

PFFFLOL it's all those 'how to become the nicest person ever' classes i've taken. Nooo but really, i'm glad that you're the most awesomest Claire player around and that I get to rp with you. Not to mention, I wouldn't be able to handle having anyone else as Claire at this point. I guess Hayden's allowed to play her, BUT IDK ABOUT THAT EVEN. BUT LOL I'M GLAD TOO. it took awhile, okay, i'm just strange like that, and I balk in the radiant light of your glory. But I always get excited whenever I do get to thread with you, partially because it makes me ~special~ and partially because then I really try to amp up my rping abilities. LIKE I SAID. INSPIRATIONAL. so really, bb, U AWESOME.