Crit Post 24

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[maddening_gale]

I'm only really familiar with Kid as a character (I've commented on House before, but I've only seen a few episodes in passing), so, here goes:

What I really like about your Kid is that you explore both sides of his need for symmetry. On one hand, you do a good job of keeping him lighthearted and quirky when it's appropriate, but you also explore the more horrifying aspects of his need for symmetry and perfection. I'll admit that some of his posts are downright chilling to read.

That said, I've only seen up to episode 26 of the animé, so I'm afraid that I can't really comment on the rest of his personality and character development. I would if I could.

[aztec]

asdfghjkl thank you! That's been one of my biggest worries about how I play Kid, if I'm overdoing the crack part of it or if I'm losing too much of the fun by keeping him too serious.

Writing Kid has really been sort of a revelation for me, not gonna lie. Getting into his head has been both fun and challenging, and he's piqued me in a way that not many RP characters have, only one or two others. I really... identify with him, so I'm glad it's coming through in the writing. ♥