Concrit Post 15

[hmd_me]

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[ttanna6]

discedo
Luke Triton | proudapprentice | Professor Layton
Itoshiki Nozomu | zetsubo_sensei | Sayonara Zetubo Sensei

mayfield_rpg
"Legal" Luke Triton | izlegal | Professor Layton
Bri-tan (The UK) | tartswithtea | Afghanis-tan
Sheska | ufosrreal | Fullmetal Alchemist
Sweden | ominousjoy | Axis Powers Hetalia
Itoshiki Nozomu | pinkandsadness | Sayonara Zetubo Sensei
Germania | grumpyopa | Axis Powers Hetalia

dear_mun // Others
Sherlock Hound | idkmybffwatson | Sherlock Hound (an AU series)
The Little Prince | drawmesheeps | The Little Prince
Germany | brotundbier | Axis Powers Hetalia

And if for whatever reason you don't want to crit here, my screened anon is here.

[german_beefcake]

... Did I bother you last HMD? Because if not, I srsly need to stalk dear_mun more for your Hound. ;.; I've never gotten to play my Mrs. Hudson with one.

[idkmybffwatson]

P-probably not; he's only there every so... very inoften, BUT THE MUSE WILL NOT DIE ON ME. Yes yes..... would be ever so grateful to play with somebody ;3; nobody knowsss the canon

[bakerstwidow]

Such a good canon though. ;.;

[grumpyopa]

Oddly enough, its not SO desperately unheard of. discedo had/has a Penny pupinurpocket I think.... /l-lazy

[pinkikemenhero]

Whoa. =o I'm surprised.

I am going to do this EVERYWHERE.

[wristsniper]

GERMANIA IS A SEX BOMB.

...idk.

ACTUAL: Is your Sheska strictly first series? /forgets

Re: I am going to do this EVERYWHERE.

[grumpyopa]

DEAR GOD YOU'RE EVERYWHERE k-kidding

Yes; i may be in need of canon review hurrhurr

[wristsniper]

W/E W/E ask my other game about my Germania obsession.

I only ask because Sheska is one of the characters whose purpose and resultant personality changes from one version to the other, and I didn't want to bring something up if it was done because of that.

It's not a big thing, I promise.

I mean, it's coming from the girl who is scared of concrit, so.

[grumpyopa]

W-wait what?

[wristsniper]

NOW I LOOK LIKE A MEANIE.

BASICALLY I WANNA BUG HER MORE BUT IDK HOW. So I want to a) canon review to make sure I've got it and b) strategize. y/n?

TOLD YOU IT WASN'T BIG GEEZ.

[grumpyopa]

FFFFF NO JUST CONFUSED

I'll take that as "tag moar" crit, then! I needa get her out more anywho

AND YES! Plotting! Sheska would make an excellent underling!

[wristsniper]

._. orz

DON'T HATE ME I LOVE MAYFIELD cry.

YES. "tag moar" works fine.

[ohmytenth]

Um

This is kinda minor... but with Nozomu, just know that as a teacher, he usually goes with their last names as opposed to their first name. So, as opposed to like, Kafuka-san and Kiri-san, it would usually be Fuura-san and Komori-san.

The only like... instance that it's not like this would be with Rin and Maria (who in her case would be Sekitsu-kun). IT'S NOT REALLY BIG THOUGH, just something to keep in mind. It may be a good idea to keep the character list handy too, just in case...

[tartswithtea]

GUH I should... Know this..... I had gone with komori-san at first, but...

Arrrggg stupid failures /BLAMES SELF