Concrit Post 15

[hmd_me]

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[sora_bezhad]

@mayfield_rpg

Meriken thebestnation

France flowercensored

Flora bbsatbyrobots

@Medius_terra

Revolutionary England taxationwithout

@thewake_rp

Russia wontyoubewithme

[one_truespark]

HEY YOU KID.

Um.

Okay! So I really like your Meriken- I've read the series now (thanks to you!) and she's spot on. I love that she's so active and vibrant, and I really like her threads with England. I wish she and Perry could interact more because they amuse me so so much. And I haven't seen much of France lately (maybe it's just me idk) and I'd like to see more! Mayfield needs more seduction, bb.

And I've been stalking your Russia and I love him. *v* Sometimes the accent gets a little funny, and I find myself going "what's he trying to say?" but most of the time it's good. Basically just keep in mind that accents can be a bit hindering if used in the wrong way. But that's only a small percent of the time; you're golden. And I can't wait to MARRY RP with you, brother!

[sora_bezhad]

Oh gosh my first crit since forever. THANK YOU! *A*

ksflk Yea, I haven't been playing France as much as I want to. But I've been reviewing his history and re-evaluating how I play him. (so nervous forever), AND HE SHOULD BE BACK IN ACTION REALLY SOON. \o/

Also, Meriken and Perry would make the ultimate crime fighting duo. We should plot or have them hang out and be cool. Because I really, really like their interactions. And I'm glad I'm doing well. ;3;

f;klsksldk I"M GLAD YOU LIKE RUSSIA. I've been working really hard on his characterization and...and it's good to know I've been doing well. AND yea, I totally agree. The accent can be super awkward sometimes (thank you for pointing it out.), I'm definitely going to work on it. Sister should stay far, far from Russia. And by far I mean I'm really excited to RP with Belarus. ;u;

Also, thank you so much for taking the time to give me crit! I really appreciate it and...and so nice. ;A;

[one_truespark]

Aw, well from what I've seen, you're doing really well! It's the sign of a really devoted player when you're willing to go and re-evaluate every so often to see how you're doing.

Yes oh gosh they will keep the entire neighborhood safe from those evil villains like RUSSIA and...IDK but other evil people. Mostly Russia; Perry thinks he's suspicious.

You're doing fine! /o/ I almost never play with an accent, but I'm going to try this time (since I'm not playing AU Natalia hur hur). Stay far away while married? '^' And aaaa ;u; I'm really excited too you have no idea. I'm going to need to work on my accent too, we'll do it together~!

You're welcome!

[el_hustino]

Flora is so cute! I'd like to see more of her. Also, I totally need to interact with your characters more.

DID I JUST CRIT MYSELF IN A COMMENT MEANT TO CRIT YOU, FUCK IF I KNOW

[sora_bezhad]

SHE'S SO MOE! And you know what this mean?

Do you?

DO YOU?

It means I'll have to toss my characters at you more. 83b