Concrit Post 5

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

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Comments

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daisychainrpg
Dr. Horrible - Dr. Horrible's Sing-Along Blog | ihasadeathray
Barry Burton - Resident Evil | colt_python (I already know I need to be more active with him orz)

smtdressingroom
Kazuya - Shin Megami Tensei | equilibrize (I just joined like... last night, so there isn't much to crit, but if you want to discuss things anyway that's cool with me!)

Homeless
Tifa Lockhart - Final Fantasy VII | blackbeltbeauty

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When I look at your Dr. Horrible, I hear NPH saying everything in my head. One of my favorite things to read is his slowly (very slowly) developing relationship with Penny. It's painfully awkward, but in a good way. It's awkward like the mini-series shows it. It's not going fast, and it shouldn't.

One thing I would like to see are some more blog posts from Horrible-san. I'm a sucker for audience participation, and I think I have a couple characters who would definitely send things in. That's something to be done in your own time, though.

I wish I could talk about Barry, but I'm completely unfamiliar with Resident Evil.