Concrit Post 5

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[tsukara]

@ theskytides (A steampunk AU)
- Sophie Hatter (Howl's Moving Castle), madhattersophie
- Anko Mitarashi (Naruto), thesnakecharm
- Mamma Gkika (Girl Genius), jaegermamma
- Susan Sto Helit (Discworld), nohoppityskip

@ crucible_rpg
- Anko Mitarashi (Naruto), poison_dango

Okay, this the the srs bsns one, right? If you have love and adoration (why would you?) my love meme thread is here

Here? Hit me. Crit, plot-ideas, concerns, questions, whatever = go for it. Heck, if all you want is an explanation for why that character said that, or what their journal name means, fire away.

[usagi_no_hime]

Anko Mitarashi
I really do love how developed Anko is becoming and I honestly have tons of fun roleplaying her against Kambei in their little snarky conversations from time to time. I also enjoy seeing her speak with her canonmates(especially how she is around Gai)!

I think Anko is pretty solid in TST and I can only say "keep up the good job".

Mamma Gkika
When it comes down to Mamma Gkika, I think you have her voice down pat but you haven't been very active as of lately (some might be my fault for never tagging back as Kambei OTL) Just more activity and I think Gkika will be doing just fine. I like the relationship that Gkika has with her canonmates and the friendship she has with Penelo.

Susan Sto HelitSusan is finally getting out and about and that makes me smile. I've been at a loss about what to do between Susan and my Cao Cao because I don't want to weigh you down with yet ANOTHER relationship sort of plot but I do have fun rping with your Susan. We just gotta do more of that! lol

[tsukara]

Anko's very fun to play off of both canonmates, I've found. Mostly because it's in her nature to be irreverent and annoying unless the situation calls for seriousness. She also seems to have a weird thing for redheads, but that's another matter...

Mamma...it's hard deciding what logs to throw her in, since she likes to try to...take over a scene. Like the bet, she and Kambei were the central figures--and she was the one doing all of the talking, etc. etc. And since I don't want to steal anyone's spotlight, well, yeah. Suggestions? She and Kambei have good interaction, since they can each hold their own, but I think she needs to branch out.

I'm glad I punted her out. She likes to skulk in the shadows and hope she doesn't get roped into doing anything but teach. Our little upcoming plot with her and the others should be fuuuuun~

Now that the whole pirate thing is done, it'll be interesting to see what happens. And Joshua's back on the Way! (Which reminds me, Sophie's frying pan has a date with someone's head...)

[fallingjunkyard]

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[madhattersophie]

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