Concrit Post 5

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

► play nice! flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for rp-anonmeme/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not

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[harpie_siren]

daisychainrpg
Link - ocarina_hero
KH!Cloud Strife = not_asoldier

wrfinalmix
Donald Duck - goin_quackers
Cloud Strife - not_asoldier

[noliektinyspace]

For both Link and Cloud, I would recommend writing a little more than just a few sentences. Maybe what they're thinking, a little more of what they're doing, some dialogue. It makes it hard to come up with a post to counter when you don't really have a lot to work off of.

Other than that, you're good! Mostly because I don't know Link's canon well...