Concrit Post 8

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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Comments

[random_prophet]

CRIT ME

CRIT ME HARD

theskytides

Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney) karmauberalles
Ocelot (Metal Gear Solid) but_inevitable
Prussia/Gilbert Weillschmidt (Axis Powers Hetalia) freds_and_wills
Hinamori Momo (Bleach) peachesnotplums

pokeology_rp
Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney) vksaurus_perfex
Giovanni (Pokemon Special) of_the_land

[starsandtildes]

HOW CAN I CRIT YOU IN AN HMD WHEN YOU ARE SO OPEN TO ME CRITTING YOU WHENEVER I WANT TO

also I want to molest your von Karma because he is the best cranky uke ever without even trying to be

[random_prophet]

W-WELL IT'S A GOOD TIME TO ASK FOR SPECIFICS IF YOU'VE BEEN HESITATING FOR WHATEVER REASON...? (also, you're actually playing Ocelol's canon now)

fff he so is, o vk

[starsandtildes]

... yeah I kind of gave up on playing MGS3, but that most recent log with Failsworth and Ocelol is so very Lolcelot. He may be trying to game the whole continent, but at the same time he is a show-off bitch. (also did you ever get that EVA for him? That would be wonderful.)

Also I love how TST is like the only game where von Karma's not played as consistently perfect and yet everyone else who plays him like that thinks you play him awesome.

[random_prophet]

god that log was so much fun. (EVA and Naked Snake are coming eventually!)

...hahahaha. He's more fun when he's not consistently perfect and just rationalizes the imperfection away though!

[starsandtildes]

I vote they double-team him.

yes well who cares about fun when it's Manfred von Karma

[random_prophet]

needs to happen.

i do

am I doing it wrong : (

[starsandtildes]

no you're doing it gloriously right

[why_halo_there]

I DON'T HAVE MUCH TO SAY but your prose and such has improved, and I like how you're getting vK out there more. : |d KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

[random_prophet]

Yaaay! I've been worrying about my prose, actually, since it kind of tends to... drop off halfway through logs when I can't think of anything to add and I just put some dialogue in. It happens with certain characters (/punts Gilbo) more often than others, and I'm not really sure what to do without it feeling unnatural.