Concrit Post 8

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[tsukara]

@ theskytides (A steampunk AU)
- Sophie Hatter (Howl's Moving Castle), madhattersophie
- Anko Mitarashi (Naruto), thesnakecharm
- Mamma Gkika (Girl Genius), jaegermamma
- Susan Sto Helit (Discworld), nohoppityskip

@ crucible_rpg
- Anko Mitarashi (Naruto), poison_dango

@ adstringendum
- Mitarashi Anko (Naruto) - scarysnakelady

Homeless/Dressing Rooms/nest_of_magpies
- loli!Anko (Naruto) - littlevipergirl
- Mogget (The Abhorsen Trilogy) - 8thshiner
- Donald Duck (Disney, with bits of canon thrown in from Kingdom Hearts, and mascoting at UO) - dontneednopants

Here? Hit me. Crit, plot-ideas, concerns, questions, whatever = go for it. Heck, if all you want is an explanation for why that character said that, or what their journal name means, fire away. If you have praise, please tell me why, not just a "omg i luv u". I like those, they make me feel warm and fuzzy--but those don't tell me what I should keep doing.

[nabradia]

This is gonna be short and sweet, but... I'd like to see more of Mamma Gkika?

When I first joined, I saw her around quite a lot, but since I've got into the game more, she hardly appears and I really like her ;___;

Through a magical combination of her and Jenka, I now wanna read the canon, sob.

[tsukara]

As...would I? Okay, that sounds weird, but it's true. I have been looking at poking her outside of the infirmary but, hey, I guess everyone being too scared of you to talk to you is the price she pays for being scary?

But it is a little tough. I'm not always the best at coming up with ideas (and...even when I do I'm hesitant to implement them for fear of steapping on someone's toes).

She lost a big chunk of CR when Kambei disappeared, so I'm also trying to recoup from that.

It sounds like excuses, but what I'm getting at is this: I agree, and I want to do so, and I'm trying to, but any ideas you have would be highly, hugely appreciated. ♥

Doooo eeeet. Mad science and romance hijinks await you!

[nabradia]

W-well, ideas aren't my strong point either, I admit. .__.

/fails

But... I do have two characters on the 4423 (Marluxia and Hiyori) so... if you ever wanted to throw her at either of them I wouldn't mind? \o/ If you did, I'm sure we could come up with some reason for it. X3

Even if Jagers make Marluxia lineface. =|

I hope I can find time for reading it soooooon~! XD