Concrit Post 8

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[harpie_siren]

Daisychain
ocarina_hero ~ Link ~ The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time
not_asoldier ~ Cloud Strife ~ Kingdom Hearts
quippage ~ Peter Parker/Spider-Man ~ The Spectacular Spider-Man
cheerleadingfu ~ Kim Possible ~ Kim Possible

Homeless
seasickwoobie ~ Cloud Strife ~ Crisis Core -Final Fantasy VII-
key_ofthe_sky ~ Sora ~ Kingdom Hearts
negi_knight ~ The Onion Knight ~ Dissidia -Final Fantasy-

[harpie_siren]

I was really confused to see Cloud ask FF!Yuffie to pretend to be from Radiant Garden. I mean, it really doesn't seem like a ruse that could hold up long if Leon talked to her about certain things in person--like events that happened back on Hollow Bastion/Radiant Garden--and...well, given Cloud's history of being manipulated and lied to, it seems like he'd be doubtful even about white lying when it concerns something as important as friends' identities.

[theguindo]

One of the things I've noticed about you is that you seem to have a really big issue with things not going your way. If people are planning or doing things you don't like, you tend to make it seem like a personal affront when it's not. You should learn to let people do their own thing; if it doesn't specifically involve you then roll with it or ignore it.

I also wonder how you can say (paraphrase from memory) that you have a problem with people who run off and do things that could easily get themselves killed, but then pick up nothing but reckless hero types. It seems like these two things are a bit at odds, don't you think?

[halfdarkened]

YES, someone who I have both experience at least one of the characters and know the series with at least some competency.

I've enjoyed your Link so far. Despite his limited in-game character development, I get a sense of his desire to help others and a decently realistic sense of that child trying to hard yo be the adult he briefly was. A very unique point of view and certainly hard to pull-off. Cloud seems appropriately quiet, but I haven't threaded much with him. Even less so for Spidey. Kim... Well, guess we'll find out this week, won't we?