Concrit Post 9

Aug 24, 2009 14:15

How's My Driving?

∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

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3zensekai August 25 2009, 19:52:32 UTC
@somarium

roronoa zoro | one piece

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blacklegcook August 26 2009, 15:24:36 UTC
Okay, I guess it's my turn then to crit you.

*takes a deep breath*

I love your Zoro, he's grumpy, all 'whatever' and fun to tease. If there was one think I had to say it'd be that I wish he'd take charge a bit more, mainly cause I suck at being a leader <<;; It's very hard you know! Let's see...Other than that I really don't have any problems with the way you portray him and he makes me want to ruffle his hair or something silly if only to see how far I can irk him, but I'm a bastard that way. ~

d-don't hate me <.<;;

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