Concrit post 10

Sep 30, 2009 01:37

How's My Driving?

∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

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moral_liberty September 30 2009, 06:22:32 UTC
@ damned
Kaworu Nagisa | Neon Genesis Evangelion | moral_liberty
Wizard Howl | Howl's Moving Castle | slipperymagic

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moral_liberty September 30 2009, 06:31:24 UTC
This anon has not had the chance to play with Kaworu yet, and doesn't know his canon well at all.

Howl, however, does not disappoint. Keep up the great work! I don't have any concrit for you in this case because there's nothing I would change in your place.

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slipperymagic September 30 2009, 07:24:05 UTC
Thank you anon, that's really nice to hear. I've been worried about balancing his moods, but, uh, hopefully I've been managing. So. Thank you. ♥ ;3;

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tiassa September 30 2009, 07:53:13 UTC
I didn't like Kaworu at all when I watched Evangelion, so I really hadn't been paying that much attention to you when you first started playing. Then I hit the visitor thread with Shinji and went, "......wait, what have I been missing."

Seriously, you make him interesting and alive in a way that I never really saw in the series and I like him. You're an amazing writer.

As for Howl, I did a little fangirl squeal of delight to see he was on the app list and haven't stopped being thrilled since. That was a character I did know and love and you have an excellent grasp on him. I was very happy to get to thread with him, even if it was, uh, limited to sedating the poor woobie.

Yes. ♥

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moral_liberty October 1 2009, 05:06:19 UTC
I've been trying all day to figure out what to say besides thank you. But. Wow. Thank you very, very much on both points. I'm blushing. ♥ ♥ ♥ ;_;

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moral_liberty October 1 2009, 05:08:18 UTC
hgjskfghdhgd thank you so much! ;A; ♥ ♥ ♥ I loved that visitor thread. You made me cry a ton during that. And... yeah. I definitely want to thread with you again very soon.

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