Concrit post 10

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[firenekomiko]

@ brofist_tv
puzzles_n_tea Professor Layton
redfaced_toeto Toeto | Vocaloid
ahiddengem Lolidragon | 1/2 Prince

@ sortinghat_rp
roll_them_up Prince | Katamari Damacy

@ mayfield_rpg
ms_scarletwitch Akako Koizumi | Magic Kaito <-- Would love help on how to play her here better

[phyrexians]

Prince is sooooo cute ♥

[firenekomiko]

I ♥ that icon!

And really? I feel so awkward playing him compared to everyone's angsty characters. I'm glad you still think he's cute!

[kukucrazywild]

Babe I would totally give you crit if I knew any of their canons.

Well. Wait. I know one of them.

Okayokay. So, um. I think Lolidragon should scheme some more? I know she's still trying to get to know people, but that didn't stop her from scheming all over the place in canon. So yes. I would love to see some more of her crazy antics.

Other than that, I really enjoy threading with you. And I love the fact that Layton is Mara's dad. How did we even come up with that, really?

totally should be doing hw now >_>

[firenekomiko]

Woohoo! Actual critic!

You're right about Loli though. I don't think I've got her voice anymore due to the last thread I did with her. Looking back on it reminds me why I never do late night tags. It was so OOC that it pained me. I think I might have her stir things up at brofist after doing a closer read through of the novel again. That and figure a way for Prince and Loli to meet up again.

Aww~ so do I. You're one of my favorite people to bounce off of. Soap Opera event. Somehow it lead to Layton being a stripper or something. I dunno but that is too epic to question.