Concrit post 10

Sep 30, 2009 01:37

How's My Driving?

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∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

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inuyashanohime September 30 2009, 16:09:09 UTC
random_prophet September 30 2009, 16:52:07 UTC
I love playing with Sekai and Ramza! I'm not really that familiar with School Days and FFT beyond the basics, but I enjoy playing with them both and would like to have my characters chill with them more.

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inuyashanohime September 30 2009, 17:04:21 UTC
:DDDD I'm glad!

I'm always worried that my Ramza and Sekai are not up to par...so hearing that makes me happy.

Yes! They need to be more active! Once the whole thing on the Silvy dies down, Ramza'll chill with a lot of people. And gain brahs. Because he needs more dude friends other than Delita. XD

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random_prophet September 30 2009, 17:05:37 UTC
...I can't offer up dude friends, but I can offer a loli? |D

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inuyashanohime September 30 2009, 17:08:26 UTC
Lolis are awesome, too :D RAMZA NEEDS FRIENDS IN GENERAL D:

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random_prophet September 30 2009, 17:09:31 UTC
WELL HE CAN HAS.

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inuyashanohime September 30 2009, 17:20:22 UTC
YAAAAAY.

Ramza will have his collection of people! It's canon for him to collect people! Like cats.

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random_prophet September 30 2009, 17:21:42 UTC
Momo joined your party!

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inuyashanohime September 30 2009, 17:31:22 UTC
Da da da DA!

*Paunched for Pokemon geekiness*

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random_prophet September 30 2009, 17:32:35 UTC
/will not punch

/i mean look at my icons

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lordsummer September 30 2009, 19:03:54 UTC
Ovelia and Teta are adorable, and I love how you've adapted Delita to the HP setting. Haven't seen much of the others, but judging from the ones I have seen, they're all fantastic too. Keep it up!

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starsandtildes September 30 2009, 19:20:10 UTC
Sekai~ Hello Doctor would like to get to know you! Shmion can introduce them, perhaps~

No real crit, just that request for CR.

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nendoroids October 1 2009, 05:33:25 UTC
STOP BEING SO HARD ON YOURSELF. NO ONE IS GOING TO GET ON YOUR ASS ABOUT THE THINGS YOU THINK THEY WILL SO RELAAAX. IF ANYONE ACTUALLY DOES, IT'S SILLY SHIT AND FUCK THEM.

Seriously Jen the things you worry about are so small in the grand scheme of things. I don't know how many times I've told you over the years we've known each other to stop being so hard on yourself, when will you listen. B< BAD SENPAI.

I would not have tried so hard to get you to app Sekai at TST if I did not think she was excellent and that you are a good player.

Anyway character specific stuff. Uhm...yeah you already know that the only one I can say anything about is Sekai lol. BUT I THINK SHE IS FANTASTIC. I don't think you're doing anything wrong SO WOULD YOU PLEASE STOP WORRYING ABOUT IT BI will say though that she seems to be better than how she was the first time you played her. Not that the way you played her then sucked or anything, she was quite good. But it's also been like...a year or so and you've made her even better. I also think the huge amount ( ... )

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