Concrit post 10

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

► play nice! flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for rp-anonmeme/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not

Comments

[sailoruresui]

@ discedo

Mirai Trunks Briefs | DBZ | hope4afuture
Dr. Kureha | One Piece | paincuresall
Haruhi Suzumiya | The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya | godpwnsu
Amy Rose | Sonic X version | hammeroflove
Kirika Yuumura| NOIR | carrythesin

commenting with this journal because I am terrible

[droid_rage]

I AM FAIL AND CAN'T SPEAK FOR THE REST but I love the fact that you don't forget that Trunks can be an awkward teenage boy when he isn't busy saving alternate timelines. I do think your grammar could use a little work in places; but nobody's perfect, and you are really fun to play with regardless. ♥

ffjalsja /heart attack!

[hope4afuture]

OH PLEASE, LOOK WHO DROPPED OUT OF CAMP LIKE YEAH SO UR NOT THE ONLY ONE. Yes, my grammar fails hard but thank you. Long as I got the awkwardness part right, yay for me!

And dear, you are the BEST 17 there is! Do not forget it! <333