Concrit Post 11

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[uwaaaah]

memento_eden
---totallynotaspaz Danny Fenton/Phantom (Danny Phantom)

realityshifted
---invisobillity Danny Fenton (Danny Phantom)

quovadis_rp
---spinootey Ashley Spinelli (Recess)

Because I won't stop bugging people for crit until I get actually get some.

[geokinetic]

HAHAHAHAHAHA INVISOBILLITY

I realize that is totally unhelpful to you but A+ HILARIOUS USERNAME GET

[invisibill]

I've never played with you and have no concrit to offer. But...

Phantom Players of the World Unite!

And great minds think alike as far as user names go?

[invisobillity]

If you app at RS then you can play with me and give me crit! 8D

THERE ARE SO FEW OF US, we must band together to protect the endangered species of DP RPers!

Inviso-Bill was just asking for username mockery the second it was uttered.

[invisibill]

I must not pick up another game, I must not pick up another game. I must not give into temptation...

We totally should! Its like the fandom just died after the series ended.

inorite! I never punned before I started playing him. Its even worse that my game provides so much fodder. Danny Phantom+Hitchhikers guide and the infinite improbability drive...

[invisobillity]

We have a Sam, tooooo...and the ability to play canon characters or AU...!

It's not really surprising to me, the way the fandom has been since waaaay back in like...'05/'06. But it is a shame that it's nearly dead--I've been trying to rekindle the love through RP!

I actually make myself pun on a daily basis as practice for RPing him. I-I don't think I'm very good...but my game doesn't have so many opportunities--he really just has his masculinity insulted every 5 minutes or so. XD

[invisibill]

...I suck at resisting temptation. How fast does the game go? Is the application long?

...I just realized that all of my characters are from practically dead fandoms. Oops?

We had an Antarctica event...where the spaceship had subzero temps and ice covered corridors... and half the people turned into penguins. There were epic punning threads with half the characters trying to one up each other. And the rest facepalming.

[invisobillity]

Game can be pretty slow to get posts up, but responses within the post can range from fast to slow pace...application length depends on your idea of what "long" is, so here's the template, and you can click around on the Taken list, most journals have the apps up. 8D

Hey, take a look at my list there. I play Ashley Spinelli. I define RPing from dead fandoms.

Dude, awesome. All I've done recently is turn Danny into a fairy and have him inherit some dirty-mouthed parrots. XD

[invisibill]

I fail at resisting. Canon sixteen-year-old Danny is now reserved.

Ffff, poor Danny.

[invisobillity]

Youuuuu...I love you. So much right now.

He is practically the game's mascot Butt Monkey now. And I don't regret it!

[shobogan]

I WANT TO HUG RS!DANNY A LOT. Ahem. I haven't seen much of the show in ages but I really think you've got his personality, and how he'd react to his situation, down pat.

I also admire your advertising zkillz.

[uwaaaah]

Awwww, really? That means quite a bit to me, because I've been trying to find a balance between his denial of the anything not-normal, his bitterness and irritation at being sleeping in the hospital bed more often than his own, and trying not to be a douchebag about it. XD I-I'm glad to know it's working!

Actually this is like the one time I have ever decently advertised anything. Including shows. Like Danny Phantom.

[shobogan]

Really! He comes across far more sympathetic than douchey. I need to throw one of mine at him. Remus can identify with being young and sickly...

It always works best when you weren't intending on it. ;p Well it is the RS cast's fault I am keep a better eye out for it.

[uwaaaah]

Well, he tries to be sympathetic, but sometimes he just can't help being an asshole. XD Such is the fate of someone who secretly is jealous of people who can go two weeks without being in the emergency room. BUT YES Danny would enjoy having a comrade to whine about sickliness with!

I gueeeeesssss...but I am still trying my damnedest to spread the love everywhere. YEEEESSSSSSSS you can download all of it too you know. I've done it. << >>

[shobogan]

It's easy to get on the "lucky bastards don't know how good they've got it" train. ;p Remus has been dealing since he was five so I'm sure he has some tips! (He doesn't have it as bad health-wise, really, but then there's the...other stuff.)

I approve! If only WE coulda got those love rings... XD NO ADVOCATING PIRACY but really my internet just sucks.

[uwaaaah]

Danny and Remus can drive the train all across the world. THEY SHALL BE THE CONDUCTORS. Danny would accept tips, but would not believe the "other stuff" Remus has to deal with. Not until he's got proof, anyway.

Well, Ma-Ti didn't do much of anything with HIS love ring... Dude, I'm not giving any money to Nick after how bad they screwed with DP. They don't deserve my money for their frankly quite shoddy DVDs. *fanraeg*