Concrit Post 11

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

∞ comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

► play nice! flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for rp-anonmeme/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not

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[saffire_persian]

There are personal concrit posts within each character's respective journals if you would prefer your comment screened.

adstringendum
Kiba Inuzuka (livesbyinstinct) - [Naruto]

conscripted
Hal "Otacon" Emmerich (deusrexmachina) - [Metal Gear Solid 4]
Kiba Inuzuka (livesbyinstinct) - [Naruto]

polychromatic
Komui Lee (coffee_gemini) - [D.Gray-man]
Shouryuu (the_ever_king) - [Twelve Kingdoms]

dear_mun/Homeless/Dropped
Ayumu Kasuga aka Osaka (lost_in_osaka) - [Azumanga Daioh]
Blue (rain_blue_wolf) - [Wolf's Rain]
Dimitri (a_noble_conman) - [Anastasia]
Dr. Perry Cox (betterthanhouse) - [SCRUBS]
Hal "Otacon" Emmerich (deusrexmachina) - [Metal Gear Solid 4]
Kiba Inuzuka (livesbyinstinct) - [Naruto]
Revy (screwjustice) - [Black Lagoon]
Sajin Komamura (wolf_of_seventh) - [Bleach]
Miguel (tough2beagod) - [The Road to El Dorado]
Mittens (sarcatstically) - [Bolt]
Nakiami (x_cloud_rider_x) - [Xam'd: Lost Memories]

[philanthropism]

Adding to what our Big Boss-mun above me has said, I can't stress enough how you shouldn't be afraid to plot stuff out with me. Even if I've announced a hiatus, I'm almost always on AIM so don't hesitate to send me a message every now and then or poke me if you want to log something out. I realize that my recent hiatus may have been untimely enough to put a damper on whatever current inclinations for a log you might have had, but it's far from my intentions to intimidate you in any way. I enjoy hearing anything you have to say, be it concrit or anything under the sun related to improving our CR.

Also adding to the crit regarding your Otacon, I do agree that he and Snake's interactions are a little on the stale side, but it's not like that can't be attributed to how little they've done with each other so far. I'd love to work with you and log something with you, s-so...

Please don't be afraid? D8