Concrit Post 12

Dec 14, 2009 01:12

I was going to put up a notice for the next meme, unfortunately, the LJ-notification problem, coupled with mod's real-life business kind of prevented that. But since we're so much later than usual, I'm just going to put the post up. I'm sorry I haven't been around to respond to you guys. We should be back on track now!

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get_me_a_drink December 21 2009, 20:19:12 UTC
I really love your Jocelyn. I really love all of yoru muses I've played with, but I will shamelessly admit she is my favorite. She is canon, muthafuckah, and I really love how you've done the research behind her. My only critique is you could make her a bit more "Bitch, we are getting this done this way NOW", sort of like how she was in Shadows. But she's also younger, as you play her, still recovering from the divorce and I'm pretty sure she's feeling guilty, so you may be doing her right after all. Just a thought. C:

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jmtooktheplanet December 21 2009, 20:22:23 UTC
ILU, but you're right. I do play her more with the younger perspective with the guilt and recovery compared to Shadows, though now I need to link you to a thread in particular ;)

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fromheavencame December 21 2009, 21:01:21 UTC
OHAI PEOPLE I DIDN'T KNOW YOU PLAYED

:|

So, first off I'd like to start with saying that I've stalked followed Faith for ages, really since I started RPing and such in March, and I've always wanted to do something with you. I think you're a fantastic player, and hell, I don't even know Buffy canon, so that's saying a lot ;~;

I have to say I love the oddness of the relationship between Jocelyn and Gabriel. The avoidance of certain things and all that, it makes it interesting. I think it makes sense too, that they could be friendly and all. Gabriel has a bit of a snarkiness to him, something that I'm working on to further now, which would be lovely to work on with Jocelyn~ as well as the common interests they have/have had. You know of which I speak ~obviously. I hope they can continue too, the awkward building and all that. Esp if it comes to something where they're all in a room together, all being her, him and Bones. \o/

Joanna ♥

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faiththatfuelsu December 21 2009, 21:10:03 UTC
I always have to laugh at that reaction. It's nice to know that I don't write my two main girls exactly the same (because I am so paranoid about that OMG.) Though I'm glad to know that Faith, as brash and whorish, and bitchy as she may be, isn't completely off putting.

As far as Jocelyn goes I've tried to capture as much of a canon voice for her as possible. It's not as easy as it is for Faith because I have so much more to work with when it comes to her as compared to... ONE BOOK for Jocelyn.

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fromheavencame December 21 2009, 21:14:00 UTC
I think you're doing great. :3

It's hard to find voices when you have little to work with. It's like with Gabriel, too. I technically~ have about two and a half episodes to work from with him, because imo~ Gabriel =/= Sylar. Sylar always seemed so enraged by anyone calling him Gabriel/making any reference to him being ~that man~, so I would think he'd have tried to rid him of it all.

:| Needs more canon for both.

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nobodys_captain December 21 2009, 21:07:32 UTC
Well. Could you play your Faith a bit less awesome, so us mere mortals could not pale in comparison? ;)

Seriously, every. single. muse. I've played against with you has been fantastic. Your characters are well researched, in character, and a pleasure to interact with. Work on figuring out some way to be online all the time.

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jmtooktheplanet December 21 2009, 21:15:04 UTC
YOU aren't even online all the time! LOL. You pumpkin out before I do. Trufax.

And seriously, right back at you. I adore you. You know this. HELL, it's *YOUR FAULT* that I have some of these folks.

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the7deadly December 21 2009, 21:26:29 UTC
Pride is quite pleased to hear this.

Seriously though, you know I adore you. <33333333

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rose_dhampir December 21 2009, 21:29:49 UTC
A certain person we both know suggested I find a way to be online all the time. I think she's crazy. Sleep is a good thing.

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jmtooktheplanet December 21 2009, 21:32:12 UTC
Two hours? I would start eating brains at that point in order to replace my lack of.

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jmtooktheplanet December 21 2009, 21:34:14 UTC
My minions? I'm lucky they haven't gone after mine...

Juuust saying.

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