Concrit Post 14

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

► Play nice! Flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for anonmemearchive/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not

Comments

[valentinite]

@damned
Sangamon Taylor, Zodiac (toxicspiderman)
Taura, The Vorkosigan Saga (ninelivesonce)
Lana Skye, Ace Attorney (fourstonewalls)

@forjusticeonly
Spark Brushel, Ace Attorney (noteandquote)
Vera Misham, Ace Attorney (whitehellebore)

[lady_angelina]

Everything I've said before about Taura and S.T. still stands, since I don't know their canons yet (although I'm working on getting up to speed with the latter), but you know I enjoy how you write them. <3

As for Lana, I know you just introed her, but it's a hell of a great start with her. :D Her reactions to waking up in a bizarre reality (and during NS, no less! I really would not have been able to handle that well with any character) are just right for her, IMHO... her practical assessment of the situation. It goes without saying that I'm so very looking forward to seeing her more around the Institute, and especially when she first encounters Ema there. <333333

[fourstonewalls]

<3 Let me know if anything comes up with Lana -- I'm especially worried about keeping her occasional snark separate from both S.T.'s and my own. (I was waffling on the line about building inspectors in her intro post, but Jen liked it and thought it was sufficiently Lana.)

I specifically wanted to do a NS intro again -- the WTF reactions are a lot of fun, and I actually find it easier in a lot of ways. And once it was clear it was going to be late in the day if at all, I decided skipping her past all the looking-for-Edgeworth on the board was probably good. I'd rather deal with most of the castmate-related reactions in threads rather than the board. Though she and Gumshoe will probably run into each other first there.

(Ema will be second shift, FYI. And first shift will be Lunge, which should be fun.)