Concrit Post 3

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[rainbowfoureyes]

Guy Cecil | gailardia_cecil | amatomnes / the_love_hotel / toujourshotel
Guy Cecil | gardios_guy | dusk_village / dusk_academy
Kouichi Aizawa | rainbowfoureyes | amatomnes
Colonello | anti_tank_rifle | amatomnes

I'd probably have more in the future, but this is what I have for now.

[lewdness]

Your guy makes me excited to play TOA, holy crap. I keep comparing the two and going, I LIKE HERS BETTER THAN THIS GUY, LOL. You've just fleshed him out so nicely, it's amazing. ♥

[gailardia_cecil]

T-thanks! Funny that you should mention that, considering I'm always going "dshfdjskhf Their Guy is better than mine!" all the time.

[lewdness]

You're amazing, bb. ♥ Shut up lmfaoooo~

[patchouli]

AT discedo:
Umi Ryuuzaki (Magic Knight Rayearth) : embracethewaves
Edward Elric (Fullmetal Alchemist) : priceoftruth
clone!Syaoran (Tsubasa Reservoir Chronicle) : featherseeking
Tamaki Suoh (Ouran Host Club) : kingfanboy

AT entranceway:
Sora (Kingdom Hearts) : bouncyhair

i know my activity at the moment is once again an issue and so is the fact that i'm slow to tagback sometimes...but i'm trying to work on them and work through kind of a rough patch right now. other than that, i'd really, REALLY love to know what i can improve on!

[patchouli]

There's only one thing that I'd really like to see more of from your characters. I'd like to see Tamaki tagging around to the girls more, wooing them with his smile and his words. You have the character down nicely, and when he does this, it's usually very entertaining. I just feel like I'm not seeing it enough. I'm excited to see what your cast does with having a room for the host club -- I hope it means we'll get to see the entire cast doing the things they're best known for.

[patchouli]

to be honest, anon, i feel like that's where i'm failing right now too xD i kind of started out doing that, but lately i've been really bad about tagging entries in general. i'm gonna try harder though! tamaki's not the only character i need to tag around with, but he's definitely prominent. thanks for the advice, anon, that'll be the first thing on my list to work on xD;;;

[patchouli]

Anytime! You've been much better with activity with your other characters, and that was the only thing that was really bugging me. You have the voice the down, it would just be awesome to see it utilized more often!

[prodigal_axe]

discedo

Aragaki Shinjiro| prodigal-axe
Sakurazuka Seishirou| satsujin-ai
Chihaya| pluschecker
Leni Milchstrasse| star-company

[skybound_love]

I've already given my appraisal fo Shinjiro and Seishirou before. They're still very well done characters. Haven't seen a lot of the other two, yet.

[prodigal_axe]

Thank ye'. I try. The other two are new and in development, but I'll try to get them out more!

[hanyaaan]

I absolutely love Chihaya~ Both Subaru and Sakura love talking to herhim and I'm seriously considering reading Earthian C:

[lockingheart]

a_trialbyfire
lockingheart | Tifa Lockhart
onlytwilight | Roxas
empressoftime | Kaileena
bright_mark | Elika

discedo
personforme | Chii
light_onmyoji | Sumeragi Subaru
fatedsight | Kaileena

entranceway
pastel_memory

I know I dropped a lot of people in several places, but I did it to loosen up on people I sit on. It's not fair. I also dropped people specifically because RL has been killing me and it's not fair to hold people up. If you're going to yell at me for that, then leave. I did it for RL reasons and because I'm tired of letting people down.

Concrit my characters, please.

[envisioned]

I didn't know you played Tifa. /goes to stalk

[lockingheart]

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[pissedkitty]

My comments just scream constructive, don't they.

[hotpinkaura]

I'm honestly ready for any and all complaints/crit/whatever you want.

dramadramaduck

Ty Lee | Avatar: Last Airbender | hotpinkaura
San | Princess Mononoke | eboshimustdie
Heather | Total Drama Island | snakeylikeakey

8_dressing

Zira | The Lion King 2: Simba's Pride | medealullabies
San | Princess Mononoke | eboshimustdie
Lady Eboshi | Princess Mononoke | ladyofironwill
Moro | Princess Mononoke | shethewolf

atladressing/various other dressing rooms, looking for a permament home

Fire Lord Azula, fandom name is Crazula | Avatar: The Last Airbender | banishor

versus_dressing

Amy Sorel | Soul Calibur | amyinthenight
I'm trying to get her more active.

Also, a list of other characters I've played is here. So if you have any crit on those I've dropped, I'll take that, too. Just in case if I decide to pick them up again.

[skybound_love]

Ty Lee and San are both very well-played. Kudos also on picking up a character few people do. Miyazaki doesn't get near enough representation. Seeing Ty Lee's reactions to the upcoming plot stuffs should be interesting.

[gonsai]

VDR just needs an activity shot in general, yaknow?

[dragoon1940]

I had not realized you were Crazula.

TRICKY!

/Mai