Concrit Post 11

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[nilradiance]

@Luceti
gardenerofgaia - Aerith Gainsborough - Final Fantasy VII
nilradiance - Cloud - Kingdom Hearts
shieldandvalor - Goofy - Kingdom Hearts

lurking around @dear_mun
gardenerofgaia / gospelofgreen - Aerith Gainsborough - Final Fantasy VII
msterbrighteyes - Cloud Strife - Final Fantasy VII
kinda looking for a home for him too, but don't know if I'll find one suitable, considering everything x.x;
7thbeatrush - Tifa Lockhart - Final Fantasy VII
any_old_delilah - "Delilah" Aerith - Final Fantasy VII (AU)

...in before "branch out", lol I have others but I haven't posted with them recently at all.

From one Goofy to another

[goofalot]

Keep up the good work!

:o Goofy~

[shieldandvalor]

Thanks!

[mikangirl]

I've been stalking your Aerith since before I joined Luceti. It was actually her dynamic with Zack and Cloud that lured me into playing >_>;;; She's brilliant, seriously.

As for KH!Cloud, I'm not as closely familiar with the Kingdom Hearts universe, but from what I remember you have his voice down pat. So honestly, I have no actual criticism for either, and this meme does say to skip the love and praise, but I figured if you're one of the people accidentally responsible for me getting over my terror of LJ RP, it's worth mentioning. :D

[samekh]

/ninjas from work

Except I've sucked the last week or so fmlfmlfml

@ discedo

Fay D. Flourite | big_kitty | Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle
Roronoa Zoro | threesword | One Piece
Sumeragi Subaru | hidesinhats | Tokyo Babylon
Yuki Eiri | perpetualstoic | Gravitation

@ kiseki_rpg

Chii | totalcockblock | Chobits
Kurogane | anewfight | Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle
Sumeragi Subaru | hidesinhats | Tokyo Babylon

[misstakin]

I would give you crit but I have nothing because you're amazing.

[starfruits]

I agree with this statement o/

psst. you rock aly. so do you adri even if this isn't your post i'm just leeching life off your comment.

[misstakin]

/leeched

[gonsai]

HERE'S THE LIST

Have at it.

[themodestotter]

I just wanted to touch on the crit I gave you a few months ago

[gonsai]

I'm a little bothered by the Ky/Venom at Sieben. It doesn't seem to be based in canon at all, which kind of bothers me, and they seem a little too.. wibbly, considering most of the time Ky's trying to kill Venom in canon? It seems slightly OOC that they'd turn around and make kissyface at one another.

Not in your game, btw. Just a random passerby over here.

[gonsai]

A) That relationship was built up over almost two years of RPing together to get to the point it is now. If you're witnessing it via versus_dressing, you haven't seen the build up that went into it.

B) Ky trying to kill Venom? He wasn't fond of him, no, and was trying to arrest him, but Ky didn't hate Venom.

[perfectrecord]

Active at damned:
Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney): perfectrecord

Homeless/fountainofcod/dear_mun/various IC memes:
Mike Meekins (Ace Attorney): dork_at_duty
Lucca (Chrono Trigger): guns_n_glasses
And several others listed on my all-purpose crit post (anon enabled/IP logging disabled/all comments screened)

As always, I am most interested in characterization/ICness and writing styleI am aware of the following issues but am open to feedback on how to overcome them

[perfectrecord]

Going anon for this just because I feel more comfortable, but: You're constantly putting yourself down. You need to stop that, because it's making people not want to thread with you. You're even doing that here: you're not unqualified to give concrit. So, just...don't put yourself down in everything you write. That's the biggest thing you can do to improve. ♥

[itsabere]

I have to say that I agree with this. You're a good person, but it gets kind of uncomfortable to watch you flagellate yourself over your RPing skills. A bit of confidence goes a long way; not only is it more attractive to others, but it may also go a long way to improve your own perspective on yourself. It's like what they say sometimes about laughing and smiling - even if you don’t feel like doing it, giving it a go can cheer you up.

[perfectrecord]

*Nodnod* Well, what I'm worried about is that I could get carried away and err on the opposite extreme and become one of those people that the RP world hates more than anything else. =/ You know, the fabled players who think they are just all that and don't live up to their claims. If the RP ranting comms have taught me anything, it's that self-confident players of any skill level carry a stigma, even if it's not warranted nor fair. =/ (Yes, I am aware that I need to take them with a grain of salt, but... XD; )

So, you're saying that... if I dare to show more confidence (whether I actually feel it or not), it won't count against me here? >.> I know that no one expects me to ever have the kind of ballsy attitude that my muse does, LOL. XD I guess there has to be a balance, a fine line there. I'll keep trying, then... and, um... what if, say, I did Jen's challenge of writing that list of positive things, even if I didn't actually believe them... would that still count?

And thank you. ^__^

[starfruits]

discedo
Hayner | Kingdom Hearts | seasaltsnack
Ren Tao | Shaman King | perpetualfrown

silenthell_rpg
Roxas | Kingdom Hearts | alternateblue

entranceway
Sora | Kingdom Hearts | brbheroing

cityofdesai
Kim Diehl | Soul Eater | inferno_witch I know I need to seriously pick up my activity here, I've just been busy nonstop the last few weeks orz

Floating around dear_mun
Maka Albarn book_and_scythe
Lavi secrethistorian
Hao Asakura incendia_anima

[strawberrium]

post moar at eway I miss you ;o;

also zimmmmmmmm

[starfruits]

lol did we just comment to each other XDDDDDDDDDD sob I'LL TRY ILU2

[strawberrium]

YEAH WELL ILU MOAR :|||||