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hmd_meme

Concrit Post 14

Feb 12, 2010 12:53

How's My Driving?

∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

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truewhitequeen February 12 2010, 18:08:29 UTC

Formerly @ realworldbites -
Thomas Raith | godofcologne | The Dresden Files
Bianca Solderini | venetianpearl | The Vampire Chronicles

Currently @ xi_rpg
Lara Raith | truewhitequeen | The Dresden Files

Currently @ dear_mun
Alia Atreides | saintlyknife | Dune
(Also the others)

Crit especially welcome for Lara and Thomas. Lara because it's the first time I've played her in a game, and Thomas because I am thinking of apping him elsewhere soon, so pre-emptive things to think about would be welcome.

musikjugend February 12 2010, 23:00:00 UTC

I have to admit that I have no canon knowledge of Lara. Or indeed anything about the Dresden Files that doesn't involve the few episodes of the TV series I watched.

With that caveat, I do love love your Lara. She comes off as nice, but you can sort of tell there's more there. I look forward to watching her thoroughly corrupt the student body.

Deleted to fix a word. Because I do swear I can read. Really.

mutedpoint December 14 2010, 03:10:05 UTC

Both your Lara and your Thomas is lovely. I love the way you play them. Of course, I've only really seen them around on D_M, and then, only as Mister, so as to how to improve I'm a little lacking.

I do however, think your Lara could do with a little more challenge. I'm not sure if this is coming across clearly, but she feels a little leashed, like there's something she wants to let out but isn't getting the chance to.

godofcologne December 14 2010, 04:55:02 UTC

Hey, Mister's mun! It's always a joy seeing him around.

I agree with you on Lara feeling leashed, and it's something I've been trying to work on. I find it particularly difficult to have her manipulate others and use them and still be certain the other characters' muns aren't going to take it personally, so I tend to err towards her playing the long subtle game. It doesn't really work as well in a setting like dear_mun as it does in a real game where consequences can be plotted in advance and worked towards, but dear_mun is also the sort of place where I worry the most about players taking things poorly.

I would love to get her into a game where I can make contact with players beforehand and let her really cut loose on some innocent bystanders (or find someone to really butt heads with), but I haven't found a place yet.

And I really really appreciate your comments about Lara. She is easily one of the harder characters I have, and it really helps to see what could use improving.

yoite February 12 2010, 18:10:22 UTC

@kakistocrati
14th/Raidou Kuzunoha XIV/Devil Summoner
hitmesouji/Yosuke Hanamura/Persona 4
sacrifight/Minato Arisato/Persona 3
nymphomatriarch/Angelica Einstellsehn/Dogs

@amatomnes
smackanddown/Badou Nails/Dogs

yeah a preemptive strike on this one: i know everything i'm doing with yosuke is wrong but i am Working Hard on fixing all of the mistakes i made

candlejack February 12 2010, 19:17:04 UTC

I actually own P3, but I've only played a little bit and I really cannot offer much crit on Minato because, ahurr, he doesn't really do that much on the game (though I know you half follow the manga, right? So yeah, nothing to offer).

We should thread Angelica and Cook more often, you're perfectly creepy with her. I haven't seen her around lately, I think, but we have different schedules so that might be it.

yoite February 12 2010, 19:19:47 UTC

WE REALLY SHOULD THREAD ANGELICA AND COOK MORE OFTEN :'(

yeah she hasn't been around lately i need to remedy that

elwhyenen February 12 2010, 20:11:35 UTC

LMFAO ANGELLICAS NEW USERNAME such a mouthful ..

idk i'm starting to get into p4 so i'll probably start following kc's cast
yosuke seems like a Moot Character though so i'm sure you're doing....well...

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witchoftheweek February 12 2010, 18:10:46 UTC

At discedo
witchoftheweek Patchouli Knowledge
fathers_pride Selim Bradley/Pride
twotails9lives Chen

At netherworld_rpg
youkai_hunting Sanae Kotiya/Kochiya
prinnvulcanus Vulcanus (Prinnified)
loyalbatmonkeys Zetta.

At mayfield_rpg
hourai_branch Kaguya Houraisan
katto_katto The Night of Wallachia

All of these should have HMD posts that are screened, allow for anon, and do not IP log. If they aren't, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE inform me here so I can fix it properly.

Finally, my muselist that needs to be updated is here if you have anything to say about them.

Eough talk. HAVE AT ME!

ttanna6 February 12 2010, 18:12:29 UTC

dividend February 12 2010, 21:44:44 UTC

I LOVE YOU LONGTIME

-- oh wait that's not hmd-like. oh well. 8)

ttanna6 February 12 2010, 23:17:42 UTC

MOM WHY ARE YOU SO USELESS?!?!?!?

knuxiechan February 12 2010, 23:56:02 UTC

vfdhk YOU PLAY SHERLOCK HOUND. omg you need to post with him on dear_mun so my Mrs. Hudson can poke him. 8D

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envisioned February 12 2010, 18:12:41 UTC

lavaliere February 12 2010, 18:14:13 UTC

All horrible.

No, jk. You know I love your Kamui. I miss playing with him... And I'll have to find someone to app at Discedo so I can come back and play with you.

envisioned February 12 2010, 18:15:44 UTC

Yes. Yes you do.

pretending February 12 2010, 18:25:32 UTC

I've been considering someone from Darker than Black.......

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