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hobbes73

Fic: Aftershocks Part 5

Aug 26, 2009 01:18

The repeated explosions of shots fired hung in the air. Her ears rang with a high-pitched tune. All she could smell was gunpowder and blood. Blood. Blood everywhere. Frantically she looked around for Elliot. He was right next to where he had landed after slipping on the broken glass from the window they had been sitting next to. His hip was ( Read more... )

fan fiction, a/o, law and order: svu, femslash, aftershocks

Comments 6

gaviotademar August 27 2009, 04:14:08 UTC

I'm really loving this.
Hope there's more soon.
Thanks.

hobbes73 August 27 2009, 14:13:19 UTC

Hmm... You seem to be alone in your loving this. :)

Glad you like it. I am editing the next part so there will be a short delay unless I get insomnia again.

Thanks for the feedback.

hysteria74 August 27 2009, 19:29:57 UTC

ohhhh another fab update. Keep this up *pretty please*?????

hobbes73 August 27 2009, 19:33:14 UTC

I've got two, maybe three more parts to go. I wanted to write a long smut scene but it doesn't work in this story. Guess I'll have to write another. Thanks for your comments.

mozzdi September 15 2009, 04:07:02 UTC

I like the story....btw, smut scene sounds good but I can understand why it would be hard to fit it in right now but an ending with smut..........

hobbes73 September 15 2009, 05:32:17 UTC

I might just have to write a smutty one shot just to get it out of my head. :D The next part is at the betas being washed and should be posted soon. No smut tho...

Thanks for the review.