Fic: Aftershocks Part 6

[hobbes73]

As he sat the bags of food on the table Olivia's cell rang.  She glanced at it, silenced it and then turned to Elliot.

"This was the best idea you've had in years," she commented pulling a paper wrapped sandwich from the bag.  One smell of the sauerkraut told her it was his.  She handed it to him and then opened her own onion-laden sandwich.

Comments

[celticshocker]

This is such a good story! I look forward to reading more.

[hobbes73]

Glad to hear. More is coming as soon as I figure out a few things. Love your avatar. Have you see in the USA ad where they call her Bad Ass? Made me LOL.

[celticshocker]

LOL, no I haven't! That's great and she is such a bad-ass...love it!

[hysteria74]

I like this update. Its just such a great insight into what these two are going through. They're not necessarily saying a lot but you get to feel their fears.

I look forward to more :-)

[hobbes73]

I was hoping that the feelings were coming through. I never can tell with my own writing. Thanks for the feedback.

[gaviotademar]

Big thanks!!hope there is more soooon!!Loving it!

[hobbes73]

More to come when I get it figured out. :) Glad you like it. Thanks for the feedback.

[huntkitty]

love the update. hope next one is soon

[hobbes73]

I'm working on the next part now. It's nearly done but for one part of the scene that I need to figure out how to show and not tell. Thanks for the feedback.

[silkpoet]

Great story, I love what are you doing with this one, the tension between them, the angts, the pain. I'm looking forward to read more, please keep going! V

[hobbes73]

Glad you like it. I'm working on the last two parts. I think it'll be two, unless I go all verbose again. :) Thanks for the feedback.