Fic: Aftershocks Part 6

Sep 22, 2009 01:56



As she waited for Alex to return Olivia could practically hear the lawyer arguing with herself about what she should say. A couple of firmly shut cabinet doors and a slammed refrigerator later Alex came back with two tall glasses of ice water.  The inquiry as to where Olivia had apparently won the dispute.

"I went out for lunch." Olivia ( Read more... )

fan fiction, a/o, law and order: svu, femslash, aftershocks

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highfructose_cs September 22 2009, 09:22:12 UTC
Great update it was worth the wait.

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hobbes73 September 22 2009, 18:19:55 UTC
Thanks. I'm working out the kinks to the end now and should have more soon.

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hysteria74 September 22 2009, 09:53:00 UTC
Oh noes! Put back together? Yes??? ::slight distressed look::

Loving the story and I full understand the writer block thing. I have a good Alex/Liv story that has stalled due to a nasty case of block!

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hobbes73 September 22 2009, 18:22:48 UTC
Don't distress. Keep the faith.

Glad you're loving the story. If you need my chisel to rid yourself of that block let me know. It's barley used since TNT is my favorite way to remove them. *eg*

Thanks for the review.

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redwingx September 22 2009, 13:27:07 UTC
This was a great chapter--hard to read, though because the tension and strain was so realistically portrayed and felt so genuine. Hope they're back together soon!

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hobbes73 September 22 2009, 18:23:43 UTC
Thanks. Realistic is what I am shooting for. The next couple chapters should be easier to read.

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liv_and_luv September 22 2009, 14:55:09 UTC
Really great chapter! I hope after all the adjustment and working through that our girls end up together. Very realistic portrayal of both sides.

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hobbes73 September 22 2009, 18:25:01 UTC
Thank you. I am glad people are thinking it's realistic. That was the reason for the delay. What I had before felt forced.

Thanks for the review.

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jaggerc1 September 22 2009, 18:05:36 UTC
Great chapter, I am really enjoying this fic. Please update soon.

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hobbes73 September 22 2009, 18:29:02 UTC
Thanks. I should have more as soon as I find time to typo it up.

Nice avatar. I thought about a SVU Heros crossover but couldn't quite get it worked out.

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