Comments | hobbes73: Fic: Aftershocks Part 7.2

hobbes73

Fic: Aftershocks Part 7.2

Nov 02, 2009 22:02

Making her way to the Manhattan Criminal Courthouse Olivia sprung for a cab. The subway would be too much hassle with the crutches. She had just given the driver her destination when he asked, "You a lawyer?"

"Cop," she replied and was treated to a story about his uncle's brother in law who had been a FBI agent during the Hoover years. For ( Read more... )

fan fiction, a/o, law and order: svu, femslash, aftershocks

Comments 9

silkpoet November 3 2009, 07:21:23 UTC

Hmmm, I like it that Olivia is finally realizing that she needs help in order to heal emotionally. I like it the Olivia detective "talking" to Olivia victim it was like a catharsis to her in someway. An objective point of view i think. Thanks for the update.

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hobbes73 November 3 2009, 13:18:28 UTC

I've always viewed Olivia the Detective and Olivia the woman as two different entities. Detective Benson is a kick ass take no prisoners type of woman. Olivia is... broken? No not broken... She has dents and aches. More human I suppose. I cut out a paragraph about her thinking she was crazy for talking to herself. :)

Thanks for the feedback.

gaviotademar November 3 2009, 18:19:45 UTC

Good to see you are back!
Thank you for the updates, well done like always.

hobbes73 November 4 2009, 02:52:02 UTC

Thanks! I am working on the next part. I'm hoping it doesn't take so long to figure out. Thanks for the feedback.

duc7ti November 3 2009, 22:30:21 UTC

Great update! I'm so glad you've come back to this story. And I agree about Det. and normal Olivia being different. I think we all have different personas for different situations. I'm looking forward to the next part.

hobbes73 November 4 2009, 03:00:38 UTC

Thanks for your patience. I'm working on the next part. I hope my muse doesn't take another vacation. :) Thanks for the feedback.

newfan305 July 21 2010, 12:51:57 UTC

I really enjoyed coming across this story. Your notes indicate you are working on another part - where can I find it?

hobbes73 July 21 2010, 17:44:08 UTC

Believe it or not I'm still working on it. Everything I've written for the last chapter has just stunk so badly that my HD thinks it is a skunk.

Have you read Different that I wrote with bluebriefs? It's set in the same universe. Right now I am working on the sequel to it and hopping it helps me figure out how to end Aftershocks.

newfan305 July 23 2010, 13:47:38 UTC

Well if you want someone to "test it out" let me know, I would be happy to read it. I have read your other story, funny - i thought it was a precursor to this one!