FILL: For Spite - Thorin/Thranduil, NC17 [Part 1]nolikereallyDecember 23 2012, 21:43:25 UTC
Thranduil has ordered him to be bathed before his audience. The steaming water is a sublime temptation after so long on the road, but the thought of being ordered to bathe-- like a disobedient lad-- makes Thorin so angry that he scarcely enjoys it. At least the elves who guard him make no pretense of getting involved in his bath; once it becomes clear that he does, indeed, know how to use soap, they ignore him entirely, conversing in their lisping tongue while he sluices away weeks of road-filth and spiderweb
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FILL: For Spite - Thorin/Thranduil, NC17 [Part 2]nolikereallyDecember 23 2012, 22:30:40 UTC
But this is not to say that Thorin does not hate Thranduil for all of these things. Thranduil has unlatched the door and ordered that more wine be brought, and Thorin watches him with such black spite that when Thranduil returns and takes his seat Thorin leans toward him and growls: "You should put an end to this charade, elf, and have me put to death before I regain my freedom. At this moment if you gave me my liberty only the promise of Erebor could dissuade me from burning every branch and dell of Mirkwood to the bare earth
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FILL: For Spite - Thorin/Thranduil, NC17 [Part 3]nolikereallyDecember 23 2012, 23:32:53 UTC
Still Thorin holds him pinned, pinioned, and when Thranduil pulls back gasping from the kiss his eyes are narrowed with anger. "So like your ancestors," he says, "you will seize whatever bright thing you see, whether it belongs to you or not
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FILL: For Spite - Thorin/Thranduil, NC17 [Part 4]nolikereallyDecember 24 2012, 17:44:12 UTC
"Take you? In the fashion of Gondor, do you mean?" Thranduil's lip twists, but his wide black pupils give up the lie, and Thorin can see nothing but lust in his face. "Dwarf, you could not survive what I would give you, if I cared to."
"Oh, certainly," smirks Thorin. "You are, naturally, repulsed and horrified?" He grinds down against Thranduil's hard length, earning a gasp and a glare. "Do you think I would even notice your cock in me
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FILL: For Spite - Thorin/Thranduil, NC17 [Part 5, COMPLETE]nolikereallyDecember 24 2012, 18:26:28 UTC
It is no mean feat to move, transfixed as he is so that his body longs to curl into itself and simply convulse around Thranduil's cock. Indeed, the Elvenking seems to find a reserve of self-control, biting his lip in a fury of determination, and finds enough purchase with his heels to manage a quick, snapping roll of his hips-- but then he shudders all over and tenses until Thorin is certain that he will feel the hot flood of Thranduil's climax at any moment, finally drawing himself back from the brink to lie sobbing for breath
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FILL: For Spite - Thorin/Thranduil, NC17 [EPILOGUE]nolikereallyDecember 24 2012, 18:30:31 UTC
The room is empty now, silent elven servants having born away the bulk of the mess. They will return shortly to clean until no trace of debauchery remains; but for now, in the corner closest to the fire, space and light bend themselves, and there is revealed-- sweating, perhaps from the heat of the fire, and glassy-eyed perhaps with the nearness of the servants whose robes have nearly brushed him, and with his face in confusion and tentative contemplation and with the heel of his hand digging into the front of his trousers as if to force some unruly inhabitant to quiescence--
--there is revealed a hobbit, who carries in his hand a golden ring.
Re: FILL: For Spite - Thorin/Thranduil, NC17 [EPILOGUE]blacknoiseDecember 24 2012, 22:25:18 UTC
I DIED AT "IN THE FASHION OF GONDOR", FOR THE RECORD.
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Bilbo.
HOW DO YOU DO THIS. You have me shipping this grudgefuck hatesex Thorin and Thranduil stuff hard. You write the most visceral, gritty sex, and still manage to have this potent eroticism going on. It's like rich, dark wine, I swear. Almost too intense, almost too complex, and it only ends up being delicious.
Re: FILL: For Spite - Thorin/Thranduil, NC17 [EPILOGUE]chaossassyDecember 24 2012, 23:21:16 UTC
This beautiful heartless creature, this tall ancient ageless body that now lies reduced to reflex and synapse beneath and within Thorin, is himself older than the oldest of Thorin's ancestors that he can recall to memory. In all his thousands of years, Thorin exults, Thranduil has never been ridden as Thorin now rides him; has never been worked as Thorin is about to work him.
This paragraph shows perfectly how you manage to keep the typical tone of the whole LotR-verse and put a little porn in it to spice it up, without making Tolkiens work look ridiculous or offending it, it just.. works and it works damn well. I've never actually read respectful porn - does this even exist? Or make sense? Whatever, you invented it. And I fucking love it.
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December 25 2012, 00:02:26 UTC
Thank you so much for putting this into words! I kept trying to pinpoint out what I loved so much about the writing style (besides the incredibly erotic porn, of course) and I think it's something to do with how well the characters - and the situations, for that matter - fit into the lore. Just... lovely. In every sense of the word.
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"Oh, certainly," smirks Thorin. "You are, naturally, repulsed and horrified?" He grinds down against Thranduil's hard length, earning a gasp and a glare. "Do you think I would even notice your cock in me ( ... )
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--there is revealed a hobbit, who carries in his hand a golden ring.
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And.
Bilbo.
HOW DO YOU DO THIS. You have me shipping this grudgefuck hatesex Thorin and Thranduil stuff hard. You write the most visceral, gritty sex, and still manage to have this potent eroticism going on. It's like rich, dark wine, I swear. Almost too intense, almost too complex, and it only ends up being delicious.
Bravo.
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(And you KNOW Gondor has some crazy-ass buttsex going on 100% of the time always.)
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This paragraph shows perfectly how you manage to keep the typical tone of the whole LotR-verse and put a little porn in it to spice it up, without making Tolkiens work look ridiculous or offending it, it just.. works and it works damn well. I've never actually read respectful porn - does this even exist? Or make sense? Whatever, you invented it. And I fucking love it.
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