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A Fitting Grave - The Ash Nazg Challenge

Nov 10, 2006 21:14

Name: Serai
Title: A Fitting Grave
Challenge: Hobbit Smut "Ash Nazg" Challenge
Word Count: 735
Rating: G
Summary: The Ring makes a promise.

( A Fitting Grave )

Comments 13

claudia603 November 21 2006, 20:52:08 UTC

Oh, a powerful and frightening image! Brrr!

frodosweetstuff November 23 2006, 13:52:46 UTC

What a great idea! Very chilling and heartbreaking - loved that Frodo's call took his mind off the ring. Thank you!

elderberrywine November 29 2006, 06:35:44 UTC

The thought that Frodo's voice would break through any enchantment that the Ring or Sauron could lay upon him rings wonderfully true, even if it was only in his own mind.

Beautifully done!

elanorgardner December 16 2006, 23:14:57 UTC

Bless Sam's heart. His thoughts were always of Frodo -- even when he thought it was just Frodo's body, he still thought only of Frodo. No wonder that he would hear his Master's voice over and above the deceptive voice of the Ring.

This is sad and lovely. Thanks so much for participating in the challenge!