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[hobo_heroine]

One burning seed will bloom into a pitch-dark flower. With the gale of destruction, bring devastation to the Earth! Synchro Summon! Flame of disaster, BLACK ROSE DRAGON!

...hmmm....maybe...

...maybe I should reverse 'pitch-dark flower' and 'flame of disaster'...

Comments

[girlgadgeteer]

I like the original, myself.

[hobo_heroine]

Ehh, I think I wanna try somethin' new, y'know?

[girlgadgeteer]

It's a little weird that all of the original phrases are really, like, BWAH, DESTRUCTION!, isn't it? I mean, I guess that's supposed to emphasize the effect or something, but aren't these supposed to be, like, a force of good or something?

[hobo_heroine]

....destruction can be a force for good!

[windanddragon]

There's not much really with 'seeds' with Black Rose, though. Maybe go with a pitch-dark flower growing into a flame of destruction, or flames of destruction revealing a pitch-dark flower, and come up with a new bit at the end.

[hobo_heroine]

Seeds turn into flowers, ya dip.

[windanddragon]

Yeah, but not the card. I mean, if it was a Phoenixian Synchro, I would say do it, but...

[hobo_heroine]

It's called artistic license!

[fuhrinkaed]

Uh... How about...

"When friendship is uncertain, the hero of love and kindness will appear! Neverending hope burst into bloom! The flower of friendship, Black Rose Dragon!"

[hobo_heroine]

Good GOD, no.

[fuhrinkaed]

Is it... that bad?

[hobo_heroine]

I'm not making my ace card's phrase all sunshine and farts, Ed!