title: like liquid gold pairing: kaisoo rating: NC-17 warning: smut, breathplay a/n: i can't believe i wrote this i cannot beleve i fkcing worte thiis and it's all for tia happy birthday lovely daffodil ❤
hot damn. this was ah-mazing. dom!soo is always great & jongin was absolutely adorable. also, baekhyun omg, i love him so much, such a sassy lil' shit and the sex. A+. yes, thank you very much x.
Hii I submitted this to KFR (you don't mind do you?) Just thought I'd let you know.. I haven't finished this yet (no smut before bedtime cough cough) but I'll be back later to comment!
I'm not very good at bdsm plots or stuff like this and although I had to take a moment to look away, I really enjoyed this fic and I was so engrossed I didn't realize it until my mother had to shake me to get me to answer her, needless to say I almost dropped my laptop. Kyungsoo and Jongin were written so well compared to the usual pwps so I am grateful to read such a good fic.. it made my day ! <3
K I'm back for the proper comment which won't be all that proper bc your swagger has struck me numb But AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH it's been a while since I read anything this sexy I can't express myself well but I hope you feel my appreciation There were so many golden parts in here, I LOVED this: The elder would say things to Jongin that he kept replaying inside of his head for days to follow, eyes glossing over in lectures as he wavered on the edge of sporting an erection in public. this is just so important it makes it feel real or something when you talk about the days after? It's just little things like this that make this awesome and different And also this: "your face when I did that was probably the hottest thing I’ve ever seen." provides me with such nice mental images And how kyungsoo called him baby right after it was so sweet just like the entire way he was worried about him and cared for his health he really was attentive. They were such a sweet, real-feeling couple altogether. And this and this Just before Kyungsoo’s hands
( ... )
Comments 18
this was ah-mazing.
dom!soo is always great & jongin was absolutely adorable.
also, baekhyun omg, i love him so much, such a sassy lil' shit
and the sex. A+.
yes, thank you very much x.
Reply
Reply
thank you for submitting it!!
Reply
Reply
Reply
But AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH it's been a while since I read anything this sexy I can't express myself well but I hope you feel my appreciation
There were so many golden parts in here, I LOVED this:
The elder would say things to Jongin that he kept replaying inside of his head for days to follow, eyes glossing over in lectures as he wavered on the edge of sporting an erection in public. this is just so important it makes it feel real or something when you talk about the days after? It's just little things like this that make this awesome and different
And also this:
"your face when I did that was probably the hottest thing I’ve ever seen." provides me with such nice mental images
And how kyungsoo called him baby right after it was so sweet just like the entire way he was worried about him and cared for his health he really was attentive. They were such a sweet, real-feeling couple altogether.
And this and this
Just before Kyungsoo’s hands ( ... )
Reply
Reply
Leave a comment