apocalypse please

Aug 17, 2004 00:09

long legs stretching into oblivion. soft kisses stolen under a starless sky. black cased in blue in black. when do these layers cease to encase my heart? half the world shrouded in shadow, melting into the soft golden blur. (break this sky open and offer it to me, cupped in the palm of your hand ( Read more... )

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_splitscreen August 17 2004, 23:18:05 UTC
Your writing is just beautiful. I don't ever know what to comment.. because your writing is just ... amazing.

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holdenismyhero August 17 2004, 23:34:50 UTC
honestly, half the time i don't know what to say myself. and a lot of the time, i find myself not writing because i can't force myself to write that first sentence. but if i can get myself started, the rest just sort of falls into place.

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malo2112 August 18 2004, 02:43:43 UTC
I agree whole-heartedly

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ilikejuiceboxes August 18 2004, 00:15:09 UTC
So beautiful. (=

Our skies down here are starless...

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vanilla_b August 19 2004, 04:44:31 UTC
dude awesome... i like you're writing mucho

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holdenismyhero September 18 2004, 00:18:56 UTC
thanks, bryce!

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