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Eddie Walker, this is your life
Jan 22, 2002 20:00
This is my introduction to my essay for Purchase. I started it at the beginning of December. I finally finished tonight. This is my favorite paragraph (
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"...you never had a son or a wife"
thepaperface
January 23 2002, 08:50:30 UTC
That's really good. But replace "in much culture" with "in a great deal of culture." Reads better.
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