blossomdreams; Moments in Time, part three, NC-17

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Mokona and the other Mokona happily chatted with Maru and Moro. Watanuki walked in the living room with Sakura. He carried the tea while Sakura carried the snacks. Fai and Kurogane sat next to Syaoran watching the Mokonas talk with each other. Watanuki noticed the way Fai and Kurogane sat next to each other. It reminded him of similar nights

Comments

[youkohiei_fan]

XD had fun reading this and especially loved how you portrayed a non-angsty Doumeki/Watanuki after the time skip and KuroganeFai.

[blossomdreams]

^^ thanks I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you didn't mind the mistakes. I just wrote it and post it quickly. XD

I wanted to do something non angsty and something that had Fai and Kurogane in it. (My other favorite couple. ^^) I felt angst wasn't good for the direction of this story. I'm glad it worked. I feel these boys need some happiness every once in awhile. XD

[ekaterin24]

I'm grinning like crazy. You tell a story that's hot, fun, and reveals the love between Doumeki and Watanuki in a way that's very consistent with their personalities.

I did notice some punctuation and word-use mistakes--if you ever want someone to beta future Watanuki/Doumeki stories for you, I'd be happy to!

[blossomdreams]

^^ I'm very happy you enjoyed it. I'm glad I kept in IC. I tried my hardest not to shift their personalities especially Watanuki's. I'm glad I did a good job with that.

Thanks can you believe this is my first finished Watanuki/Doumeki story. I saw the time limit and I just wrote it without looking it over. I want to post it to other places, but I want to polish it up a bit before I do. I still have the original file could you beta it for me? I would appreciate it. ^^

[ekaterin24]

Sure, I'd be glad to beta it! Please send me the file at:

ekaterin24 "at" yahoo "dot" com