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Leverage Fic: Unfounded Fears

Dec 28, 2010 01:16

Title: Unfounded Fears
Genre: Family, hurt/comfort
Word Count: ~4,000
Rating: PG-13 (language)
Pairings: Eliot/Nate friendship
Warnings: None
Summary: Tag to The Jail House Job. Nate realizes what he did was wrong in lying to the team. Eliot's there to tell him everything will be ok. This fic fulfills the hc_bingo prompt toothache. Written for sheryden.
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hc_bingo, leverage, fan fiction

Comments 5

sheryden December 28 2010, 06:46:25 UTC

D'aw, I really loved this. &hearts I can feel for Nate, I really can. Dentists freak me out. And I love Parker and her musical chairs, lol.

hollow_echos December 30 2010, 09:07:57 UTC

Awww, I'm glad you liked the fic! I agree, dentists are a bit creepy. And you can always count on Parker for a humorous line at the most odd moments :D

Thanks for reading and reviewing as always! Also, completely unrelated, but after reading about the Leverageland comm on your LJ, I broke down and joined. You're looking at the newest member of Team Thief! What team are you on? Regardless of what it is, I look forward to seeing what you come up with for the next round's challenges!

sheryden December 30 2010, 09:14:13 UTC

Awesome! It is SUCH a fun comm! I'm on Team Hitter. :D

deepbluemermaid December 28 2010, 13:18:19 UTC

I really like this! An interesting look at Eliot's perspective, and why he stuck around - and after the recent episodes, the conversation about betrayal has extra unspoken weight!

If you don't mind, I just wanted to point out a couple of small errors. You have 'tenant' when it should be 'tenet', and 'conscious' when it should be 'conscience'.

hollow_echos December 30 2010, 09:10:51 UTC

Thanks for the fantastic review! I'm glad you liked the story. And yes, I hadn't thought of that, but seeing as Eliot very recently found out how witholding information can affect team dynamics, we did get an interesting turning of the table in the finale.

As for my errors, thank you for pointing them out! This was a very quick fic (out in a few hours, a quick turn around from my speedy beta, and then posting) so I'm not surprised that a few errors slipped through. I count on close readers with excellent eyes to catch my remaining mistakes, so thanks for that!