Chasing Shadows at Midnight

Jul 06, 2008 18:35

Title: Chasing Shadows At Midnight
Author: LoveAngel2141
Beta Credit: torncorpse
Characters: Riku & Sora
Word Count: 11,561
Rating: NC_17
Summary: Riku only had a moment to contemplate exactly what Sora would be doing at his house, more precisely, what he would be doing barging into his room.
Disclaimer: This is a total and complete work of fiction. I in no way own ( Read more... )

kingdom hearts, sora, fan fiction, kairi, riku

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hollow_strife July 7 2008, 21:25:09 UTC
Thank you sweetie! I'm always kind of shocked whenever some one puts something of mine in their memories, but really thank you! And I'm so very glad you liked it!

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rainbowserenity July 8 2008, 01:30:16 UTC
*ahem*

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OMNOMNOMNOMNOMN ;lskja;lskjfa holy crap.
WHY DON'T YOU WRITE MORE PORN. HOLY CHEESE. *flailded*

But besides the pron, it was also so sweet and lovely and emotional and just graaahalkf I love these two. THEY ARE MY KH OTP FOREVER. ♥

Man. I'm totally honored to be blamed for this. IT'S FABULOUS! ♥!

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hollow_strife July 8 2008, 01:35:15 UTC
Why do I not write more porn? Because I totally think I suck at it and to keep my suckage from other peoples eyes. But thank you very much for the compliment of on my porn writing abilities.

They are my KH OTP as well, which is probably why I let myself be talked into writing this so easily.

And I'm glad you don't mind being blamed for this, since I was basically going to blame you for it anyway! But I am glad you liked it hon!

*Sends you your Riku shaped cookies along with some special Sora ones I baked just for you*

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rainbowserenity July 8 2008, 01:45:10 UTC
Oh psssh, you most certainly don't suck at it! >D It's definitely better than anything I could write, and you totally deserve all compliments! ♥

Ahaha, I totally don't mind getting blamed for ficcage. >D INSPIRATION, WHUT WHUT. \o/

Man, cookies of both of my gaming OTP's? >3 OMNOMNOMNNNNN. >DDD
I totally want to make Zack cookies, omg

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hollow_strife July 8 2008, 01:48:22 UTC
Ah ha, no. I seriously have to faith in my writing when it comes to smut. I think my normal writing is pretty okay, sometimes even good, but my smut is awful.

Well your probably going to be blamed for the next Riku / Sora fic I write. Just because, well, you kind of forced me into wriitng for them. And I need to find some way to keep to you motivated to actually cosplay as Zack. Even if I am doing it in some messed up way by writing about your gaming OTP'S.

You make Zack cookies, I'll make Cloud cookies, and we can share.

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isa_alorah July 9 2008, 16:42:22 UTC
You know, I'm not usually one for sex. I like the kisses. Those are nice. But I read through, and... quite liked it. It wasn't obscene, and though lengthy, it was still enjoyable.

Sora was definitely well-written, and though Riku did overplay the angst, it's okay. We all know he's an angst-muffin at heart. Especially with that "How will I face everyone now?" comment. Boo hoo. That's fine, Sora will kiss it better.

God, and I loved that devilish twist you gave Sora. It's hard to find good dom!Sora-y goodness. So thanks for that. Oh, and the "Just call me Riku" part killed me dead. Like, rofl-ded. xD That was awesome.

Yay for long comments! *throws confetti*

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hollow_strife July 9 2008, 21:44:57 UTC
Thank you hon. I'm actually not one of those people whop enjoys writing sex scenes. I prefer to just leave it up to people imaginations. But, well, I felt like the situation called for it, so I wrote it. And I'm glad you enjoyed it, and I agonized so much over the length of the entire piece, you have no idea.

Riku is a little angst muffin, which is probably part of the reason I love him so much. And that whole comment was just so over the top. It made me crack up so much when Sora just looked at him and made that cute little face. And I tired to keep Sora really close to being in character, and Riku to,. even if I did exaggerate him a bit to aid in my own little ideas. :)

Heh thank you! I could totally see him saying that in my min! If there was ever a line I was going to reuse it would probably be that one!

Long comments are love hon, absolute love! *Gives you cookies*

Thank you sweetie!

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isa_alorah July 10 2008, 22:21:59 UTC
Yay, cookies! I was just thinking about baking some, but it's too warm for the oven... *shrugs and enjoys the cookie goodness while replying*

I'm glad you wrote it. :D And I'm also thankful that you put your effort into writing it. I can never finish a long story, I swear. It could only ever be a one-shot with too many monologues. xD

Yes, yes, such is the reason I have that for an icon. The best part of the game, right there, at the end. So worth it.

I've been going off about it to my friend, too. Trying to get them to read whatever I read. She quite enjoys the ship as well. xD

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hollow_strife July 10 2008, 22:33:34 UTC
Please excuse me inability to spell and or type. I've pretty much given up on it unless it's for a story.

Thank you sweetie. I try to put an effort into everything I write, although some things come out better then other.

It kind of prepares you for the long, never ending battle ahead. I swear, you would think Xemnas would just give up after a while, but no. Yes, I do like to rant about Xemnas's inability to just let it go.

Thank you hon! I do that as well, pass things I read that I actually enjoy on to my friends, and I love when they do the same.

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sunlightsama July 19 2008, 21:38:38 UTC
[ignore the lateness of the comment, please. D:]

this was beautifully written. you've got some real talent with portraying character's emotions .

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hollow_strife July 19 2008, 21:40:02 UTC
Aw thank you sweetie! I do try.

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sunlightsama July 19 2008, 21:43:00 UTC
You're welcome. <3

I'll read some of your other stuff later, but there's a rainstorm outside that i'd like to go sit in for a bit. x'D

so be expecting some other reviews from me~

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hollow_strife July 19 2008, 21:49:36 UTC
Ah no worries. I'll warn you, some of my, well, some of my more early work is not as good as this. At least I don't think it is. But thank you!

And I love rain storms so I completely understand.

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ikuto August 1 2008, 22:20:00 UTC

*Squeels*

( ♥ ω ♥ )

This was beautifully written hun. You captured Riku's angst so well, and you did Sora very well too.

I'm adding it to memories if thats alright. =)

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hollow_strife August 2 2008, 01:31:44 UTC
Thank you very much hon! I like to think that angst is my area of expertise, or at the area I feel most comfortable writing.

Of course that's alright! I'm glad you liked it!

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