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Matt | Part 1 lucky_breath December 9 2011, 03:06:33 UTC
Name: Sparky
Age: 24
Journal: unactive
Contact: Mods have this!

1. Character's Name: Matthew James Shae. Or simply, Matt

2. Age: 24

3. Background:
Description of Matt's homeworld.About 100 years prior to Matthew's birth, the world's governments called a conference to settle their differences once and for all. At this conference, it was decided that national borders would be dissolved and all the people would be united under one government. This government, while working under the guise of a democracy, slowly began to accrue absolute power until it no longer resembled a democracy, but a dictatorship. With the borders dissolved and the world united, it was then renamed: Burim Pax, meaning the source of peace. And true to it's name, violence was all but stamped out when weapons of all kinds were outlawed and destroyed. Violent members of society were caught and exiled to Greenland and parts of Siberia. Health care became universal. Technology grew by leaps and bounds. And everyone became equals, depending on who you asked. It was a utopia. ( ... )

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Matt | Part 2 lucky_breath December 9 2011, 03:08:50 UTC
4. Personality:Before becoming an experiment, Matthew was once an active and lively person. He laughed all the time, loved to goof off and make other people laugh. His social status didn't matter much to him, which is why he never bothered to put much effort into his grades, unlike his sisters who were vigilent students. And it wasn't that Matt wasn't a smart boy. He just didn't try very hard and it showed. Though after graduating college, Matt wished he had applied himself more. And that had more to do with disappointing his parents than the crappy job he managed to land himself. He was relatively happy with his station in life ( ... )

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Matt | Part 3 lucky_breath December 9 2011, 03:13:38 UTC
7. Abilities: Matthew's bones are all cybernetic, which has added weight to his body and essentially makes him part android. And has made him significantly stronger. He can comfortably lift up to 200 pounds and can also put his fist through most solid materials, like stone or metal. It will take several strikes to actually cause any significant damage. This will severely damage the skin on his hands.

8. Languages: Common

9. Items: His clothes, one can of synthetic skin, and his old Elegante comm.

10. Weapons: No weapons.

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Matt | Part 4 lucky_breath December 9 2011, 03:15:03 UTC
11. Writing sample - Third Person Prose:They were out again. Matt had heard their rhythmic marching had ducked into an alley to hide in the shadows. He watched them pass by and waited until the sound of their walking faded into the chattering of the crowd. Great. Matt knew what the marching meant. His picture was going to be plastered on the evening news and everyone would be looking to turn him in ( ... )

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PENDING lord_admin December 13 2011, 13:53:41 UTC
We like your application, but the Previous Game History requires further detail, including links. You are welcome to re-work the current submission. Matt will also lose his MS Elegante communicator upon entering the Keep as so far we have been asking players not to include previous game constructs and apparatus in appearance or item sections when carrying over their CR. If you have any questions, please contact a moderator via PM or AIM (Xhan: Xhan23, Stellar: Stellarserenity6 or Froggy: cubivorian) We look forward to hearing from you!

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Previous CR madteos December 13 2011, 23:35:52 UTC
Matt arrived in early September and spent about 4 months on the ms_elegante. There he made friends and experienced a lot of things his world had previously barred from him, like candy, beef, and even alcohol. He didn't really know what to do with all of this new found freedom, but he did do his best to enjoy it, because he didn't really know if it was a dream or not. Matt's life could probably be considered much simpler on the boat, because never in a million years, would he have been able to get covered in magnetic letters. Despite the simplicity, his life certainly wasn't the best, because even though he was in new place, he still managed to get himself in trouble.

But it was much better than it was in Burim Pax. The people aboard helped draw Matt out of his shell. While his reserved nature kept most of them at arms length, it was still wonderful knowing there were people who wouldn't turn on you at the drop of a hat.

Among the friends he had made, three in particular became especially dear to him. idkmybffsean he considers his bro and would do most ( ... )

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ACCEPTED lord_admin December 14 2011, 08:23:20 UTC
Your application has been accepted. Congratulations and welcome to Holloway's Keep! Your character's room number is 3081. Now please do the following:

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3. Please disable customized comments by going to Journal Style > Customize Selected theme and selecting 'Yes' in the 'Disable Customized Comments' section of Basic Options.

Lastly, come on over to the keep_ooc and introduce yourself! You are also welcome (and encouraged!) to say hello in our AIM chat, hollowayskeep. Get yourself settled in and if you have any questions, please contact a moderator!

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