Picture fail

[hollso]

I've been struggling to finish this picture. It's not every day that I manage to do some art of my own characters, and its frustrating that I'm not happy with this.

I've already managed to do a traditional version because I liked how the lineart turned out (then I went very loose with my markers).

At Rest by =jet3270 on deviantARTBut I had my

Comments

[avon_deer]

the background could lighten that image up a bit if you turned the red to blue.