Sulu/Chekov (Holiday??) Fics

Jan 11, 2011 19:22

Here are two of my Sulu/Chekov fics that I did for the 12 Days of Xmas challenge:

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secretsolitaire January 12 2011, 02:53:40 UTC
Oh man, I really love that second one. I laughed so much over Pavel and his drums, and the ending is just so sweet. ♥♥

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hollycomb January 12 2011, 15:03:18 UTC
Thanks so much for reading! :)

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mizzmarvel January 12 2011, 05:26:17 UTC
Okay, for serious, the second one is one of my favorite S/C pieces by you. It's so subtly emotional.

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hollycomb January 12 2011, 15:03:49 UTC
Thank you very much! It was one of my favorite ones that I wrote last year. :)

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hollycomb January 12 2011, 15:04:23 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad you liked the little poem ;__;

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katmarajade January 13 2011, 03:49:37 UTC
Chekov stares up at him. Hikaru raises his eyebrow. Birds twitter out in the bushes.

“The flute in this case is my penis?” Chekov says.

“Um. Yeah. It was -”

“You have to be clear about these things in Standard. There are colloquial usages that I'm not familiar with.”

“I -”

“Hikaru, it is a joke! Suck me, yes, go!”
LOL! LOL! *dies*

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katmarajade January 13 2011, 03:56:32 UTC
The second one is the most darling thing I've read in ages. Seriously, my heart is all glowy right now. I love how you captured both of their insecurities and vulnerabilities and fears without making them seem overly emo or trite or weak. Hikaru with his routines and Pavel with his frenetic genius all-over-the-place-ness. The bits with Kirk, "No, he -- oh," Pavel says. "Yes, that is precisely what he suggested." and Sulu's offhand thought that Kirk must be behind the drumset. HAHA! I like how Sulu avoids the confrontation and how Pavel is so aware of his surroundings and notices the plants and the little details (but not the BIG PICTURE until it's obvious) and how he's got a favorite plant. Awww. And that poem is so utterly darling and dear. I love it. Sweet and awkward and so perfectly Pavel. *cuddles him* And I'm kinda a sucker for Hikaru calling him Baby in situations like this, so I'm completely swoony here. I absolutely adore this. Seriously, one of my favorite bits I've read in ages. Love, love, love. ♥

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