fic: disintegration

[hollyhorcrux]

Title: Disintegration
Pairing: Sirius/Remus
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 1489.
Disclaimer: Not my boys
Warnings: Angst, mention of smut.
Summary: Drabbly AU in which Sirius is not the wrongly accused - but this is not a happy ever after.

Comments

[eprime]

What a gut-wrenching tale you've weaved. Beautiful and believable and completely heart breaking. I will crawl away to whimper in a fetal position now. (and make up stories in my mind about puppies frolicking in fields or something)

[hollyhorcrux]

Ohhh, don't be sad! Don't worry, it DEFINITELY didn't happen like this. They DEFINITELY lived happily ever after :D

thank you!

Re: Will be reccing this.

[hollyhorcrux]

ndasfvahsgdhdf. i don't even know what to say to this - i squealed like a bloody idiot reading this :) thank you so much, it means such a lot. really, don't even know what to say to this kind of loveliness! thank you :D thank you very very much.

[desds]

OMG. This was really good! It was a solid fic from start to finish and it really made me feel for these two men. I don't even particularly ship them but a good fic is hard to deny.

Great stuff!

[hollyhorcrux]

Eee thank you so much! :D

[treeson]

the final lines in the final chapter of the greatest book Remus has ever read.

Are you sure that is not your summary? Because holy heck it explains this crumbling love story brilliantly.

Your writing is gorgeous. Lines like the above and This silence envelops like them James' old cloak used too -- effortlessly, completely, perfectly. The story is tight, and every word just shows. I love it.

<3 treeson

[hollyhorcrux]

I very, very nearly ended it with that line! But it didn't quite feel done to me. It still doesn't, to be honest, but I'm never happy with endings (:

Thank you so much. I'm so pleased that you liked it. Thank you!

[hollyhorcrux]

thank you so much!