Fic: The Game of You (Chuck/Dan, NC-17) Part b

[hollywood_r_bin]

Title: The Game of You (part b)
Fandom: Gossip Girl
Characters/Pairings: Chuck/Dan, Blair
Rating: NC-17
Series: 2nd installment in the Game verse, Sequel to Damage Control, previous part here
Warning: dubious consent, semi-prostitution (as much of it as last time), strangulation (during sex)
Summary: Dan slowly adjusts to having Chuck in his life.

Comments

[porvora]

you can't stop there~!
this is hawt and angsty at the same time.
although you tell this in c's pov I can feel for poor d in the end there.. *hugs dan*

[hollywood_r_bin]

Yeah, there was supposed to be only one sequel, but the building up of the relationship took longer than I thought so now there's gonna be another part. Hopefully I'll be able to get it done but at the moment I got a lot of school work... kinda why I posted this part first, cause if it's just lying there on my computer it's distracting.

Thank you, that's what I was going for.

[midiilovesyou]

Aww I feel so bad for Dan. And he was so excited to go see Chuck (even if he doesn't say it haha). I'm glad Chuck broke it off with Blair though, maybe when Dan hears that or something he'll know that Chucks craaazy about him. ; )

[hollywood_r_bin]

Yeah, Chuck and Dan are dating... and neither of them will actually say it

wow

[susperia13]

that was intense please i hope you can update soon.

Re: wow

[hollywood_r_bin]

Thank you... I'm a notoriously slow writer but at least i got a scene done so far.

Re: Hi, I really enjoyed this fic!!

[hollywood_r_bin]

Thank you so much :) Wow, the best huh? Thanks.Good to know it's one of those fics you keep rereading :) And of course i'm continuing this story, it's just I'm a really slow writer so it may take many months before it's done so you'll have to wait a while. I only got a page down so far and it's mid term season right now for me. I'm one and a half term away from graduating so i got a lot on my plate

Re: Hi, I really enjoyed this fic!!

[hollywood_r_bin]

No problem :) When i joined the Chuck/Dan wagon there wasn't nearly enough around but it's understandable since that was before The Serena Also Rises. But yeah, there's more short drabbly things than there are long ones... and some long ones I'm not particularly happy with characterization. IMO this ship is not an easy one to write, not the hardest but certainly not easy keeping everyone in character and having a storyline and romance so I'm not surprised there isn't more fics of them. I mean, with writing mine it took forever and I definitely had trouble writing Dan in the beginning.

Lol right.Too bad about that. And lol, it's the internet, everyone's a stalker, it's normal :p

[ramenlass]

dear sweet Charles doth protest to much, snickers in amusement, seems lonely boy, Danny Humphrey has gotten under his skin even more than Queen Blair and Blair is just so perfectly Queen. Yes this is tv-canon brilliance to the T. No doubt about that

=)

[hollywood_r_bin]

Lol, that he does. hehe, I love writing people in denial, also people who are dating other people without realizing it. And thanks, I love Queen Blair :D

Also, this comment, you sound SO Gossip Girl hehe. Thank you, I tried rather hard to keep everyone in character. I actually had 2 test audiance, one who helps with sex scenes, the other helps with characterization.

[ramenlass]

Nods. I've really warmed up to Miss Meester being Blair, so much that I've almost (but not quite) forgotten my vision of Novel!Blair. I guess my number one complaint about TV Blair is the fact that she doesn't daydream as much. I really liked that about her character in the original. On the other hand, TV Blair is the kind of character you want to stand up and applaud, I love love love when she takes down "enemies". Brief as it was you captured the Blair-ness that is Blair. LOL

[hollywood_r_bin]

I actually don't like novel Blair that much. One of the thing that annoyed me was her constant complaints about her step dad. I found it quite irritating, and at least when TV Blair doesn't like someone, she tries to do something about it. You're definitely right about wanting to stand up and applause. I don't mind that she doesn't daydream much. I wish Jenny was more like in the book though. Also Vanessa cause I really like book Vanessa even if not in the first book. But I'm glad Dan isn't like in the book cause I really want to beat the crap out of him... I want to beat the crap out of TV Dan also, but less often.