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homestuck kink meme VII

Jul 04, 2011 17:29

HOME STUCK KINK MEME VII

I WILL GO DOWN WITH THIS SHIPPPP (this one's closed)

BUT THE REST OF YOU MAY CARRY ON

==> OVER HERE.

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A Small Feeling 1/? anonymous July 19 2011, 04:43:34 UTC

I'm not very experienced in writing smut, so I'm not sure if there'll be any."Tav, bro, wake up ( ... )

Re: A Small Feeling 1/? sagitaurus July 19 2011, 05:50:01 UTC

FFFFFF! OH ANON! I canna wait for more.<3 This is incredibly cute<333

Re: A Small Feeling 1/? misdreya July 19 2011, 06:14:21 UTC

*hunkers down* I'm so excited for this fic.

Re: A Small Feeling 1/? anonymous July 19 2011, 16:39:47 UTC

All of the cute. All of it.
hmph, standard sounding comment does indeed sound standard. Here, have some cookies insteadt. *hands over cookies*

A Small Feeling 2/? anonymous July 20 2011, 04:33:20 UTC

Thanks for all your comments! 8D Just for you guys, here's a quick update~
Also, thanks for the cookies anon. <33 "Tav? It's totally okay if you don't want me to." The troll's voice was soft against his neck and it sent a small shiver through him. It had sounded a bit...disappointed ( ... )

Re: A Small Feeling 2/? anonymous July 21 2011, 04:01:15 UTC

Oh snit, look at this rapidfire updating.
By the way, I don't know if this should be the end or if I should write more. Err, any suggestions?Tavros sucked in a long breath through his nose, afraid to move his lips against Gamzee's finger ( ... )

A Small Feeling 3.5/3? anonymous July 21 2011, 04:02:40 UTC

Oh, fail with that last post. It was supposed to be 3/3?
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He found himself pressed against the wall, his back slippery against the flat surface. A light pressure settled on his shoulders; he realized that it was Gamzee's hands and he relaxed instinctively. It was a slow and awkward kiss, with Gamzee making sure not to progress too fast and startle him, and with himself not knowing what to do. Still, he closed his eyes and wrapped his arms around Gamzee's waist, even following the other troll's lips as he pulled away to try and make it last longer.
It was around Gamzee that he felt the safest, where he was sure that nothing would hurt him.

The troll smiled down at him with half-lidded eyes that spoke of safety, warmth, and comfort. He had nothing to be afraid of.

He opened his mouth and said in a clear voice, "Me too."

"I'm flushed for you too."

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? superfiller July 21 2011, 04:26:43 UTC

Awwww~!

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? anonymous July 21 2011, 20:25:34 UTC

This was the intended effect. 8DDD

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? anonymous July 21 2011, 18:27:40 UTC

1. acquire a mirror
2. imagine a basket full of the most adorable kittens you have ever seen
3. look at your face, and yep, that's about exactly my expression right now. :D

The fill is fine as it is but I certainly wouldn't say no to some MOAR!

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? anonymous July 21 2011, 20:41:21 UTC

Aww, thanks! I uhh, didn't really think I wrote it well, but this makes me feel better.

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? anonymous July 22 2011, 09:09:10 UTC

(different anon)

What are you talking about?

You capture Tavros's mindset perfectly.

I can hardly wait to read more!

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? anonymous July 23 2011, 02:48:32 UTC

Baww, thanks. <333

I don't think there'll be any more, because I just don't know how to continue it. I'm sorry. D:

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? misdreya July 22 2011, 01:50:51 UTC

I was chill until this:

The troll smiled down at him with half-lidded eyes that spoke of safety, warmth, and comfort. He had nothing to be afraid of.

and then i was GONE, gone in a half squealing, half melting pile of goo with visions of the most comforting comfort!sex in existence dancing through my head. My god.

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? anonymous July 23 2011, 02:50:38 UTC

P-pfff, that made me laugh so hard. xD

I guess it's a good thing I didn't write any smut because I utterly fail at it. It would've ruined the visions of, um, the most comforting comfort!sex in existence?

Re: A Small Feeling 3.5/3? misdreya July 23 2011, 03:00:56 UTC

nonono what are you talking about?

Don't worry about ruining my expectations, just do it!
I mean, if you were planning on it, that is.

Please?

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