Down the Rabbit Hole - Chapter Two

[homespunfic]

Thanks to Daisy for helping cut this up into manageble pieces.
Oh, and I forgot, rollover Mandarin translation! :)

Comments

[browncoat_2x2]

Darlin'... I'm speechless. This is one of the finest pieces of writing I've read.

Your observations of Mal through Simon are brilliant. And the tension and sense of danger are so immediate and real, it's very compelling and gripping!

I'm so excited about this story!

I cannot *wait* for more!!

[homespunfic]

Gee 2x2, thank you. S'almost as good as Choices. :) Seriously, thanks, because I have looked at this for too long and I can't tell anymore what works and doesn't, so it's nice to know you liked it.

[jpgr]

Great job! Can't wait for more! It's not taking you half an hour to write one line anymore, is it? : )

[homespunfic]

Ummm... I'm going to refrain from answering that question.
But thanks.

[genesse]

Geez, cliffhangers already?

*will wait as long as it takes, but hopes it's not long*

[homespunfic]

Geez, impatience already?

:P
I have a stockpile of chapters. It's when I get through them that I'll start worrying...

[keridwen]

Co, this is awesome. :)

[homespunfic]

thanks!

[nightspawn]

Big love for your icon:)