Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Three

[homespunfic]

Comments

[miss_daizy]

This is such a wonderful conflict. You can so see how they want to get over their difference, but can't seem to...they come from such different places and they so badly mis-understand each other. And I love "game fish in a stocked pond". Such a Simon reaction to a crisis.

[homespunfic]

Aw, thanks for saying. I'm glad you got me posting this.

[michiba]

I want more now!! I don't want to have to wait for the rest...

Very good. Such good dialouge, and really interesting insight on Simon's view of the alliance.

[pelirroja_ljc]

Ditto!

[homespunfic]

Hey, that's nice but I want more than ditto, missy! It's your fault they're in this mess!

[homespunfic]

Thanks very much! I never thought I would find writing Simon POV so intriguing. It's been fun. And, there's more... :)

[jpgr]

Even though I knew exactly what was coming, reading it is a tota;;y different thing. You made everything very visual. Brilliant job!

[homespunfic]

Hey, thanks. I know you had to listen to the whole verbal synopsis and discussion for hours (and hours) so I'm glad reading it is still worth it.

[browncoat_2x2]

YOu know I love this. I said it before, but I'll say it again. Your images are so beautifully clear and the scene has a great flow to it... such clear pictures of each of them, dialogue in character, and intriguing plot that has me itching to read the next part. Keep it coming!!!!

[homespunfic]

Thank you dear, your comments make me happy indeed. It's nice to have affirmation, especially after I have lived with this so long, and gotten too close to it to always see clearly.

[genesse]

Wonderful. You got both of them perfectly.

[thegiantkiller]

I love your icon. Rowlf has always been my favourite muppet.

[genesse]

Thanks! It's by mediocrechick.