Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Four

Dec 01, 2006 23:42


Yes, that's when it takes place.

Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Four )

dtrh, simon, mal

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kit_the_brave December 4 2006, 23:32:21 UTC
Jpgr is right - meditative-breathing!Simon was wonderful. And they're both so right in their own ways that they just can't listen to the other one. I love this!

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homespunfic December 5 2006, 13:48:12 UTC
Thanks Kit! Silly men.

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homespunfic December 5 2006, 13:49:27 UTC
Thanks Dernie! Glad you could hear it.

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pelirroja_ljc December 6 2006, 01:46:47 UTC
Just catching up after having been away.

I’m thinking it’d be better if you were quiet now,” he said evenly. “Much more yap is guaranteed to push me over that very thin line into collecting the bounty on you myself.”

I love this. The whole sequence leading to it is so Simon and the response is so Mal. You can just see in his eyes that he'd really want to hit Simon but relies on the oh so dry restatemnt of the obvious.

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homespunfic December 6 2006, 02:34:14 UTC
Thanks Pel, hope it brightened your week a little.

And yay, comments from you, the ebil prompting-person who started me down the long, twisting road that is this fic. Glad you can see Mal's eyes.

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