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Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Five

Dec 04, 2006 14:38

( Down the Rabbit Hole, Chapter Five )

dtrh, simon, mal

Comments 14

keridwen December 4 2006, 19:58:38 UTC

It just keeps getting better and better. I love Mal's response to the hovercraft.

homespunfic December 4 2006, 20:20:16 UTC

Thanks again, Keridwen. Glad to know you're still reading and enjoying!

browncoat_2x2 December 4 2006, 22:06:31 UTC

Ooh... I love Mal's last line... that's just awesome! Felt it right in my gut.

But I do hope they go back for Mal's coat some time? :o( *wibble*

I need more of this!! MOOOORRRRRRE!!!

Seriously, darlin'... it's so cool :oD

homespunfic December 5 2006, 13:53:51 UTC

Oh, goody, because with Daizy's help I shamelessly manipulated the chapter breaks to have that be the last line. More's coming, maybe sooner than later. Made possible by your enthusiastic feedback!
And, ya know, Mal can always get a new coat.

browncoat_2x2 December 5 2006, 13:59:31 UTC

:o.

Blasphemer!!!

You MUST get his coat back!!! You MUST!!!! *rocks back and forth* A new coat is WRONG!!!!! It's just not the same, no no no no no!

Great manipulation, btw... beautiful ending...

And yay for more!!!

kit_the_brave December 4 2006, 23:36:10 UTC

Oh, I can't wait - they just keep getting in more and more trouble...

And "Simon failed miserably at not jumping" is such a great line.

homespunfic December 5 2006, 13:55:10 UTC

Thanks again, Kit. I amused myself with imagining Simon, all PO'd, talking himself into being fierce, then jumping a mile high. Hee.

michiba December 5 2006, 02:09:38 UTC

Still wonderful, but I just can't stop worrying about Mal's coat. He can't be without it!

Still want more!

homespunfic December 5 2006, 13:57:59 UTC

Hmmm, why is there no love for Simon's vest? Everyone worries about Mal's coat but noooo-one worries about Simon's vest. I can see why Simon gets in a snit...

Thanks for commenting, it makes me mucho happy.

pelirroja_ljc December 6 2006, 01:51:50 UTC

“Take off your vest, Doc.”

“My...what?”

Mal was shrugging out of his long coat. “Your vest. We’re goin’ back among folk, be best not to wear what they’re like to identify us by.”

“Oh.” Simon unbuttoned his bright madras vest and handed it to Mal, who rolled it up inside his own coat, and stuffed both garments into one of the lifesaver niches.

“Fit the gun here.” Mal tucked the pistol in the back of Simon’s belt and eyed him critically. “Can’t do much about the rest of you, but… muss your hair up some. Fella on the “Wanted” capture’s got neat hair.”

jfhkjdhjkhsdfakshjkahkljdsh Mal trying to unpreppy Simon and get teh pole out of his butt.

Plus I love Mal's assessment of don't worry we'll make level 4 and then some.

homespunfic December 6 2006, 02:31:57 UTC

Finally some love for Simon and his vest. :)
Yeah, the boys might be in some trouble come morning...

ashavah January 3 2007, 16:25:01 UTC

I also loved the bit about his vest. Just so's you know.

And the sarcasm is brilliant.