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Down the Rabbit Hole - Yes, By God, It's Chapter Nine

Feb 15, 2007 14:25

Ginormous apologies for the delay. Even bigger apologies to browncoat_2x2 and terimaru for begging them for feedback weeks ago, and summarily blowing off much of their valid and excellent repairwork. Just know that this could have been better had I listened to them. They rock and I am just crazy and stubborn like that. After which I had the nerve to ask terimaru to look this ( Read more... )

dtrh, simon, mal

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kit_the_brave February 15 2007, 20:51:16 UTC

SQUEE!

More fic! It's wonderful!

I love how Simon's thoughts as he's getting the hover recall the situations he's been in like this in the past, and how none of them are quite like this. (Joyriding!Simon and his father - I can sort of picture his father secretly being pleased that Simon is hanging out with the "right" wealthy crowd and paricipating in their rituals. :)) And I love the way his conscience keeps beating him up about shooting Mal.

And Kaylee's advice!

And you even have a Mal and Simon icon!

It's just the thing for a sickdesk! Thank you!

homespunfic February 15 2007, 20:55:42 UTC

Happy to be of service. Thanks!

browncoat_2x2 February 15 2007, 21:31:42 UTC

Well, it reads well, as usualy, despite ignoring my suggestions *wink*

Seriously, it's another great part, I get so excited and nervous when I read it, wondering what's going to happen next *G*

Poor Simon, doing his best but still not quiet measuring up in Mal's eyes... he's doin' good though. And poor Mal, hurting...

I love it when Simon says it's only fair if Mal were to shoot him too, poor boy, so guilty *G* doctors, eh? *G*

Well, I'm so happy to see this part! I hope this might give you a boost and the rest will come quickly! :oD but no pressure *hugs*

homespunfic February 15 2007, 21:49:29 UTC

Ah, I'm glad I'm forgiven and that you liked. I hope it gives me a boost, too! Thanks as always for your help, commiseration and inspiration. And for finding the extra and missing "". I'm always excited to see what you're going to say.
:D

browncoat_2x2 February 24 2007, 14:57:41 UTC

And vice-versa! I always look forward to your comments... maybe someday I'll actually finish and post something again that you *can* post to *G*

and Yay for your inspiring boost!!! Can't wait for the next chapter!

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homespunfic February 15 2007, 21:50:09 UTC

Thank you, Dernie. Next time I shall supply popcorn. :)

jpgr February 15 2007, 21:57:50 UTC

I am so proud of you! A fab chapter well worth the wait. Just don't make it as long before the next one.

Oh, and thank you Kit for making her post!

homespunfic February 15 2007, 22:04:46 UTC

Thank you. But it's not like I have big long gaps on purpose. *Points at Mal and Simon* It's their fault!

excellent jpgr February 16 2007, 02:20:39 UTC

yay, another chapter! your writing is so good, i stumbled upon the story at firefly fans.net and enjoyed it so much, i have just been dying for more. my heart rate is honestly still up after that chapter, it was so exhilarating..eagerly awaiting the next bit!

Re: excellent homespunfic February 16 2007, 19:06:54 UTC

Thank you very much...whoever you are. :) I'm sorry to have kept you waiting, I'm bad like that. I hope your heart rate is back to normal...for now.

ashavah February 18 2007, 14:55:35 UTC

Hurrah, you've finally managed to get it out! Fantastic work as per usual, and really well done showing how Simon, despite being a 'murderous renegade' still really isn't cut out for this sort of thing. And, as browncoat_2x2 pointed out, how he still can't get things right.

For all the difficulty he gives you, you really do write Simon well, you know.