Oh, so good! Thanks for posting! I love Mal's words on the harshness of life, it's so good, so true to the characters. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Oh, I love, love, love, love this! The "slurry of fatigue and fear" and the "characteristic eye rub" and the way Simon both realizes so much and at the same time misunderstands so many things. And Mal, of course, is perfect. We know he's tough enough to defy the odds and survive, and yet his toughness is something that never should have had to happen... *snif*
I love when you explain to me what I've written. No, really, I think you understand it better than I do. I could probably use a lot fewer words :D. Thank you, dear Kit.
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Oh.
Unless that's just a reaction to how long it takes me to post new chapters.
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Thanks much :)
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It's amazing!
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Thank you, dear Kit.
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