Down the Rabbit Hole - Chapterette 14

[homespunfic]

Shortish compared to 13, and they're still in the house, and there's no action and much talking, but they wanted to include this part. Probably because it was the idea that started the whole story, although it has since been eclipsed by everything else going on. Funny how that works, huh

Comments

[darkhorse422]

It works! I love the tie in to Niska and the River references. Thanks for the update I'm leaving for a week tomorrow away from my comp. I can't wait for more.

Fantastic!!

[homespunfic]

Thank you so much. I so appreciated the feedback. I'm sorry I didn't reply before you left. Hope to have more when you return.

[kit_the_brave]

WOAH. I was't expecting that at all, and the buildup to the revelation at the end is brilliant! Mal is just out of it enough to make you wonder if he doesn't know what he's saying... and then, of course, he does. Brilliant!

[homespunfic]

Oh, Kit, thanks so much. You make me so happy by reading and commenting.